I need help for Improvement
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Topic: I need help for Improvement
Posted By: thefoxyaidan
Subject: I need help for Improvement
Date Posted: 14 April 2009 at 5:21pm
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I desperately need to improve this because this is one of my Favorite pieces and i reckon it could be improved  PLEASE HELP ME |
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Posted By: applecatpaws
Date Posted: 14 April 2009 at 6:07pm
| You should shade it. I see shines, but no shadows. |
Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 14 April 2009 at 6:31pm
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The part that dosent have the ship behind it looks to solid compared to the almost transparant part. ------------- |
Posted By: thefoxyaidan
Date Posted: 14 April 2009 at 6:46pm
I need other people to have a go at it 
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Posted By: TMH
Date Posted: 14 April 2009 at 7:41pm
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you dont necisarily need some one make an edit for you, just take advice and try to improve, although edits are a nice bonus ------------- |
Posted By: thefoxyaidan
Date Posted: 14 April 2009 at 7:58pm
| i need to be shown though |
Posted By: applecatpaws
Date Posted: 14 April 2009 at 8:14pm
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Well, you seem to know where your light source is (based on the shine, it appears to be the upper left), and the color of the ship is well-lit, so you really should be able to find where shadows would go by yourself... :/
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Posted By: skooba-dude
Date Posted: 15 April 2009 at 12:30am
why the banding? why the black outlines? try actually shading from a light source maybe .....
I can't help myself, I'll be back with an edit. ------------- 
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Posted By: skooba-dude
Date Posted: 15 April 2009 at 12:58am
edit:
fixed up:jagged lines, bad shapes, shading, teeth, eye, colours, other miniscule things.-------------
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Posted By: kuph
Date Posted: 15 April 2009 at 1:05am
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If I were you (although I'm not), I wouldn't use such saturated colors for the ship. Other than that, follow skooba's advices and it should come out just fine. And watch those black lines, too. It gives the piece and overall thickness that could be avoided.
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Posted By: thefoxyaidan
Date Posted: 15 April 2009 at 1:11am
| It is supposed to have an angry eye because it is evil |
Posted By: skooba-dude
Date Posted: 15 April 2009 at 5:45pm
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oh soz, I'm sure yours will look angry when you produce the updated version. -------------
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Posted By: God_Is_Evil
Date Posted: 16 April 2009 at 5:07pm
~~Here i also did a edit~~ Notice that im drawing on a midtone, "A mid tone is a color that is mid saturation mid brightness." Also look at the colors i used. some shifting between hues, "hue shifting is shifting slightly into other colors. an example would be sorta purple/blue getting lighter and lighter tell it's sorta Blue/Green" |
Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 16 April 2009 at 9:55pm
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God IS NOT evil after all, XD. (Happy Bday too) @thefoxyaidan, learn from that its all there - zoom in, study - make your own version again. ------------- |