tree wip
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=9002
Printed Date: 13 June 2026 at 6:20am
Topic: tree wip
Posted By: cheezburger
Subject: tree wip
Date Posted: 19 August 2009 at 10:44am
you think this is a good idea?
 will update in a moment
 found some good colors update ime :D

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Posted By: PSC159
Date Posted: 19 August 2009 at 12:01pm
What's style is this? I haven't seen this style before.
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Posted By: cheezburger
Date Posted: 19 August 2009 at 12:07pm
is that sarcasm :D i just pixelise the same way i draw so that's why its weird and i'm pretty new to pixelart :S heres an update :)
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Posted By: Dhr. Bosch
Date Posted: 19 August 2009 at 2:00pm
so far i like it pretty much, but the sun is very awkward. perhaps it's not bright enough or too large ore something, but itlooks weird. and i like your style
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Posted By: Zeratanus
Date Posted: 19 August 2009 at 3:53pm
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Why does the sun have a black outline? But otherwise it's lookin pretty good.
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Posted By: cheezburger
Date Posted: 20 August 2009 at 9:49am
@Dhr. Bosch i know i realized that too i'm gonna shift a bit of red into it and some white too. The sun is also oval which is just...weird.
@Zeratanus i know im gonna fix that it all just placement of everything the black outline will be removed later :D
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Posted By: cheezburger
Date Posted: 20 August 2009 at 10:38am
 so far so good
update 1 new color:

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Posted By: cheezburger
Date Posted: 21 September 2009 at 2:26am
update time =)

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Posted By: Manupix
Date Posted: 21 September 2009 at 7:25am
You're new to pixelart??? Geez! This rocks!
The trunk is amazing! Your heavy dithering is very controlled, so it's ok. Be careful with it though, just a few more pixels would make it too much, maybe you can lighten it a little.
The hole in the trunk looks too circular.
I have a problem with that lonely leaf on the left border. Are these leaves falling from the tree?
And you will have problems with the sun: I don't see how you can get away with it so big, and I don't really like it to be in line with the tree. But maybe it's just that I don't see your idea yet.
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 21 September 2009 at 8:06am
Wonderful work on the texture!
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Posted By: cheezburger
Date Posted: 21 September 2009 at 11:46pm
@Manupix: i will try to either make the trunk lighter or the roots darker since i realised that the roots are very light compared to the trunk. should i try make the hole like this:
 the sun is well.... it... gives more depth to the image although i know its gonna be real hard to make i really want it that way i dont really know why... the stray leag, i am gonna add more leaves and make it look like they are following a wind which is viewed in here:

better start fixing the stuff :S
@Lollige: thank man although im not really sure how to texture the leaves on the tree. any ideas
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