Pixel Joint Forum: W.I.P. Dohydra.

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   Hello I have another sprite, I need some tips and sugestions on it.

here it is.

Yes it's a fakemon so the selout is different then most of the sprites here.
I know about some of the flaws, but what do you guys think ?

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Crosell Seaman Joined: 01 September 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Topic: W.I.P. Dohydra. Posted: 14 September 2008 at 4:27am
	Hello I have another sprite, I need some tips and sugestions on it. here it is. Yes it's a fakemon so the selout is different then most of the sprites here. I know about some of the flaws, but what do you guys think ?
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 14 September 2008 at 4:13pm
	I think the unsaturated green-greys of the body look odd alongside the super-saturated reds. The line where the color changes along the stomach also looks a little too defined imo. I also think the two brightest reds could use a bigger value gap.
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Crosell Seaman Joined: 01 September 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 15 September 2008 at 3:50pm
	you speak in words I dont understand, I'm not the best in the English language so that's why. Anyway I gave it another colour and made some changes in the shading. I hope it is any better. Some Critism is appreciated. :)
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