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minipuck
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Topic: weekly challenge entry.
Posted: 07 October 2008 at 5:56am

okay this is my entry so far:

was my first draw.

now i got this:

a bit more work:

Edited by minipuck - 07 October 2008 at 6:12am

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Aeyon
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Posted: 07 October 2008 at 7:22am

Is the wing on the right supposed to look like it isn't attached to the Heart?

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minipuck
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Posted: 07 October 2008 at 7:24am

yes, they're both supposed to be loose of the heart.
i might move them a bit later on

edit:
more stuff

getting pretty far, got more to do, but i quite like it.

Edited by minipuck - 07 October 2008 at 10:02am

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pipe
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Posted: 07 October 2008 at 1:04pm

good work.There is not much I can suggest but wouldnt it look better if wings were larger and I think that you need to use less saturation on that hills.
EDIT:I mean you need to make the green darker

Edited by pipe - 08 October 2008 at 3:07am

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minipuck
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Posted: 07 October 2008 at 9:37pm

okay, but, the hills are only like halfway on saturation.

Edited by minipuck - 07 October 2008 at 9:53pm

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minipuck
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Posted: 09 October 2008 at 6:47am

workin' on the rainbow.

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Posted: 10 October 2008 at 1:10pm

It looks really good. The only thing that bothers me is the purple between red and blue. Oh, and the rainbow's colors are in the wrong order, but I'm assuming that was intentional.

For some reason the hills remind me of a game..I can't remember which one at the moment though.

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minipuck
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Posted: 10 October 2008 at 11:17pm

finished the rainbow, im not really happy with it

im at 16 colors now btw.
time to play with the palette a little bit.

Edited by minipuck - 11 October 2008 at 1:08pm

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pipe
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Posted: 13 October 2008 at 1:09pm

the hills are looking better now but are you sure you want to use dithering on that heart?and the sky is too bright now imo
EDIT:
something like this?

I spent about 3 minutes on this but I think you get the idea

Edited by pipe - 13 October 2008 at 1:43pm

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minipuck
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Posted: 13 October 2008 at 10:34pm

dude... the challenge is over, it's only voting now....
+ i like min better. but i think that's personal opinion.

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minipuck Commander Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185	Topic: weekly challenge entry. Posted: 07 October 2008 at 5:56am
	okay this is my entry so far: was my first draw. now i got this: a bit more work: Edited by minipuck - 07 October 2008 at 6:12am
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Aeyon Seaman Joined: 01 October 2008 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 23	Posted: 07 October 2008 at 7:22am
	Is the wing on the right supposed to look like it isn't attached to the Heart?
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minipuck Commander Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185	Posted: 07 October 2008 at 7:24am
	yes, they're both supposed to be loose of the heart. i might move them a bit later on edit: more stuff getting pretty far, got more to do, but i quite like it. Edited by minipuck - 07 October 2008 at 10:02am
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pipe Commander Joined: 11 August 2008 Location: Croatia Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Posted: 07 October 2008 at 1:04pm
	good work.There is not much I can suggest but wouldnt it look better if wings were larger and I think that you need to use less saturation on that hills. EDIT:I mean you need to make the green darker Edited by pipe - 08 October 2008 at 3:07am
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minipuck Commander Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185	Posted: 07 October 2008 at 9:37pm
	okay, but, the hills are only like halfway on saturation. Edited by minipuck - 07 October 2008 at 9:53pm
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minipuck Commander Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185	Posted: 09 October 2008 at 6:47am
	workin' on the rainbow.
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Shaduu Seaman Joined: 29 December 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 10 October 2008 at 1:10pm
	It looks really good. The only thing that bothers me is the purple between red and blue. Oh, and the rainbow's colors are in the wrong order, but I'm assuming that was intentional. For some reason the hills remind me of a game..I can't remember which one at the moment though.
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minipuck Commander Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185	Posted: 10 October 2008 at 11:17pm
	finished the rainbow, im not really happy with it im at 16 colors now btw. time to play with the palette a little bit. Edited by minipuck - 11 October 2008 at 1:08pm
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pipe Commander Joined: 11 August 2008 Location: Croatia Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Posted: 13 October 2008 at 1:09pm
	the hills are looking better now but are you sure you want to use dithering on that heart?and the sky is too bright now imo EDIT: something like this? I spent about 3 minutes on this but I think you get the idea Edited by pipe - 13 October 2008 at 1:43pm
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minipuck Commander Joined: 23 August 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 185	Posted: 13 October 2008 at 10:34pm
	dude... the challenge is over, it's only voting now.... + i like min better. but i think that's personal opinion.
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