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CherryDarling
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Quote CherryDarling Replybullet Topic: Audrey WIP
    Posted: 28 December 2008 at 10:28pm
I decided to do a portrait and randomly picked this picture of Audrey Hepburn. I just wanted to post my WIP to see if I am on the right track and what I can improve on, as I am still new to pixel art.



Her lips scare me.

Any advice would be much appreciated!
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Quote kwigbo Replybullet Posted: 03 January 2009 at 9:52pm
The lips should have a bit of a white highlight on them. The upper left portion of the lips makes her look like she is sneering. Good start keep going.

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Quote Platnium Replybullet Posted: 04 January 2009 at 10:41am
She looks to flat, just add some more shading and it should look better.
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