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threezeros000
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Quote threezeros000 Replybullet Topic: Criticism
    Posted: 29 January 2009 at 5:34am
Hi guys, I was just wondering if you could give me some criticism on this.

It is not done, and I know I am horrible compared to you guys but...

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Quote freesonwang Replybullet Posted: 02 February 2009 at 11:03am
The perspective is off. I see what you're trying to do. I think you were trying to do isometric right? Isometric means you use two pixels instead of one as you go up (you used one and got a 45 degree angle here). Try using two and see where that gets you.

If you we'en't going for the isometric look and were trying for a skewed top down orthogonal look, everything is okay except for the weels. You would only be able to see the top of them, and virtually none of the sides of it. Also, I believe the top part of a car is a lot larger than what you have drawn.

Good luck!
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