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Ricki
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Joined: 06 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 52 |
![]() Topic: WIP - Gas maskPosted: 05 February 2009 at 3:15pm |
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I made this today during "challenge" with few of my friends:) I would want to know, is it good to submit and what do you say to light? Is good or bad?
Comment on whole image are accepted and welcome:) Thanks for every comment :) Here it the piece:) ![]() |
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Evilagram
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Joined: 05 August 2008 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 168 |
![]() Posted: 05 February 2009 at 4:05pm |
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Awesome colors.
I'd say that it's good enough for submission as is, but there's always room for improvement. The highlights on the dark side seem odd. They're too bright, and they look like specular highlights, but the lightsource shouldn't be able to shine directly on that part. |
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Ricki
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Joined: 06 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 52 |
![]() Posted: 06 February 2009 at 1:47am |
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Evilagram: Thanks. I am glad you like the colors. And to lights :), I will edit it, on my notebook it looks quite dark, on other monitor itīs bright. :/...
Changes will come :) |
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Morbid_curios
Seaman
Joined: 03 February 2009 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 7 |
![]() Posted: 06 February 2009 at 6:56pm |
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I do like where you are going with this,
The use of White is quite harsh, unless the gas mask is made entirely out of high gloss glass it. the leather of the mask should be reflecting with a light brown, and the reflections shouldn't be as strong as the glass, otherwise the mind interprets it as made from the same material, also I like the duller reflection on the shadow side of the mask, unfortunately because if the size you have made this reflection it this is where your eye looks first and gives the illusion that that eye is bigger than the one on the right. and the deep red shouldn't go completely around the left eye, but after all that I do like it, keep up the good work. |
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Ricki
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Joined: 06 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 52 |
![]() Posted: 07 February 2009 at 7:18am |
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I have made very small changes since first version. Now this version will be submited. Thanks you both guys :) Your comments helped me.
Morbid_curios: I know, but when I was creating this I want to give an post-apocalyptic atmosphere so thatīs reason for strong light. But when I look at it for longer time it doesnīt look like high gloss glass for me :). Of course I removed deep red, and I eroded it(literally) it didnīt belong to it .:) ![]() |
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jeremy
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Joined: 25 November 2024 Location: New Zealand Online Status: Offline Posts: 1704 |
![]() Posted: 07 February 2009 at 1:58pm |
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I think that the mouth area's lighting is little off:
![]() It's unclear whether lighting is coming from below or the right. Perhaps define the 2 parts are seperate, e.g:
![]() also, quick edit of the white, it does seem a bit harsh. I've always thought of post-apocalyptic as being more oraange/red/some other dull, warm colour:
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Ricki
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Joined: 06 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 52 |
![]() Posted: 07 February 2009 at 3:42pm |
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Jeremy: I accept your edit. It helped to it.
but I think I will keep that white light, donīt know why. Maybe itīs only my view on that thing.. I have got mess in it, canīt decide whatīs better...argh. :D |
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Keeper-of-Styx
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Joined: 12 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 50 |
![]() Posted: 07 February 2009 at 5:58pm |
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I don't know what it is. I seem to like the white light too lol.
You know what would be interesting? If you had the reflection of a mushroom cloud or something reflecting on the mask. Edited by Keeper-of-Styx - 07 February 2009 at 5:58pm |
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Ricki
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![]() Posted: 08 February 2009 at 4:56am |
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Keeper-of-Styx: Yeah, thatīs great idea with that mushroom cloud. Maybe I will do it. That what I have there now should be split glass from headshot or granade fragment :D or something like that...
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