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TMH
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    Posted: 22 February 2009 at 3:54pm
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 22 February 2009 at 4:41pm
So, explain:
What are we seing? Why is the man naked and does he have an extremely weird face? Why are the ducks on the wall that really freak your eyes out, and why are is the door curved?

Note that I am not saying its bad, I just want you to think about things.
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Quote TMH Replybullet Posted: 22 February 2009 at 5:02pm
the man is trying to find his clothes or he will be late for work, the ducks on the wall is wall paper and im sorry about your eyes. the door is curved cause thats what they look like in cartoons
ive been working on it and...
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Quote TMH Replybullet Posted: 22 February 2009 at 6:01pm
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 22 February 2009 at 8:29pm
Door shape is odd and handle is too high.
Wallpaper is stealing too much attention away from the foreground.
Item is spelled with a "t".
Text in blue and grey are difficult to read.
Not sure what's on the man's chin.
Scene as a whole seems cramped.
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Quote TMH Replybullet Posted: 23 February 2009 at 1:21pm
do you think that the door should be square?

edit: bg change sguare door, words fixed


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Quote Platnium Replybullet Posted: 23 February 2009 at 1:39pm
Some weird ass stairs, what is the point of them?
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Quote TMH Replybullet Posted: 23 February 2009 at 1:59pm
to walk down... no jk. i dunno
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Quote Quake Replybullet Posted: 25 February 2009 at 8:08am
If there no reason you're adding it, don't

make the text white and the door looks better :]
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Quote TMH Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2009 at 2:36pm
im not sure why the text should be white and the stairs are there because the house has an upstairs
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2009 at 7:37pm
But the stairs don't lead to another floor, they just form a plateau a few feet above ground floor.

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Quote .Anubis. Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2009 at 8:35pm
The mouth looks like a nose and the chin looks like lips, not sure what is what really, shading is pretty nice so far. But the face is kinda weird to read.
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