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Niels
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Quote Niels Replybullet Topic: Nature+Farm
    Posted: 27 February 2009 at 10:44am
Hi there, I think i will need lots of tips for this pixelart.
Jep its isometric and uhmmm awh well here ya go:


Oh and i didnt really mind about the amount of colors
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Quote agur Replybullet Posted: 01 March 2009 at 12:52am
Really nice hay roof. As to crits, try adding more stuff. The tree leafs now look a bit flat altogether, try adding some shadow to the tree top. Also I find the fence to be a bit to big in scale compared to tree/building.

Edited by agur - 01 March 2009 at 12:52am
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Quote Emtch Replybullet Posted: 03 March 2009 at 11:08am
Well, you didn't make a bunch of plastic cubes, that makes this piece much better than most isometric stuff in the gallery.
 
Now some critique:
Make the house larger, or make the fence smaller.
The tree lacks volume, add some highlights and shadows.
Are you gonna need all that space in the top left part?
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