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Quote TMH Replybullet Topic: Afro square and the world of Lotostyle
    Posted: 28 April 2009 at 5:58pm
this is my wip for the challenge. used many styles... inspired by the dragon of many styles  someone did i think it was ssm-04

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Quote TMH Replybullet Posted: 30 April 2009 at 1:19pm
nuthing... :S
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 30 April 2009 at 1:23pm
Don't be impatient >:(

I will give my 2cents later :p
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Quote Dr D Replybullet Posted: 30 April 2009 at 3:25pm
Did you ever read that long winded comment I gave you on one of your latest pieces? Well, I don't think you're trying hard enough to try something different, something less blob-ular and more defined. You need more pixel-level detail, I think, especially with this 4-color palette. And don't blame it on style.

Even if it's not your thing, at least try it, and tell us the results, I really think you could benefit from refining things a bit more. At least, in this case.

The bear sprite is pretty redundant, and your clouds and mountains look like jello. I do like the HUD, though.


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Quote TMH Replybullet Posted: 01 May 2009 at 1:58pm
im not sure what hud and pixel level means but i will work on the clouds and mountains. i thought that this one was less bloby then other later ones.
also i did this title screen befor reading this so sry if its f**k.

edit: oftopic but wow they bleep sh*t out now!? :P


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