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    Posted: 04 June 2009 at 7:50pm
I tried my hand at MSPaint for the first time today (or at least the first time in a LONG loong while, if I ever did anything with it) and played around with the line tool. In the end, I came up with something like this:



How do you like it?
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Quote Pumpkinbot Replybullet Posted: 04 June 2009 at 8:05pm

OMNOMNOM. :D It looks cute. I WANNA PET IT!

Seriously, this looks good. But the back looks weird. I can't tell if it's odd shading or a design. :/
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Quote KXMoon Replybullet Posted: 04 June 2009 at 8:14pm
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OMNOMNOM. :D It looks cute. I WANNA PET IT!

Seriously, this looks good. But the back looks weird. I can't tell if it's odd shading or a design. :/


Thanks. His name is Joseph :D

You mean that symbol? It's a reference to sotc
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Quote Pumpkinbot Replybullet Posted: 04 June 2009 at 8:18pm
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Originally posted by Pumpkinbot

OMNOMNOM. :D It looks cute. I WANNA PET IT!

Seriously, this looks good. But the back looks weird. I can't tell if it's odd shading or a design. :/


Thanks. His name is Joseph :D

You mean that symbol? It's a reference to sotc
Well, I'd suggest using a different color for either the shading, or the symbols 'cause they're too similar. :/ *pets Joseph, losing an arm in the process* He's hungry. FEEDING TIEM! :D
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Quote crisis Replybullet Posted: 05 June 2009 at 7:14am
I'm afraid to come too near; I kinda like my arms ^^
 
I think the skin needs some texture but that's just my opinion.
Also, the color of the teeth is too close to the color of the background for my liking. There's not really any contrast between them so they end up looking kinda flat.
 
I'm not sure, but what do you think about removing the black line between the gums and the teeth? Maybe dither / blend the color in a little.
 
One last thing - the corners of the eye could use some fine-tuning, and the eye itself is kind of plain. The highlight is also in the wrong place.
 
Anyway, great work :) MSPaint is love.
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Quote KXMoon Replybullet Posted: 05 June 2009 at 12:09pm
It's supposed to be a sprite for a game, so the background is transparent.


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