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Scruffs
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Topic: final fantasy guys
Posted: 01 October 2005 at 7:03pm

Squall from FF

Cloud from FF

tell me what you think

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Filax_666
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Posted: 01 October 2005 at 11:27pm

i think they look kinda confusing

maybe you should keep them simple in the beginning and then try to
put some details. for exemple: cloud, although hes lookin to the right
(hes looking to the right isnt he?) looks like turning his back on
us....it looks kinda weird. also their pants look confusing, especially
squalls ones.

probably with some work youll get them perfect, you just got to find
the right way to show all those details without confusing the whole
thing...

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acrylicana
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Posted: 02 October 2005 at 4:49pm

I like them.
I don't find them confusing at all..f course it might depend on your monitor size and resolution.
Cloud doesn't look like his back if facing us..what are you talking about Filax? (confused).

I think you should work on more FF characters.

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Scruffs
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Posted: 02 October 2005 at 5:09pm

thanks acrylica ill be sure to do that

my brother made the same comment as you, Filax, so i know what you mean. I think it's because of his left shoulder but im not really sure.

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Wannahlakujuu
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Posted: 03 October 2005 at 12:03pm

It's because of the cape, or atleast thats what i think. Good job though

I am Spartacus

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Monkey 'o Doom
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Posted: 03 October 2005 at 2:48pm

It looks like his hair goes down too low on Cloud, and the body looks too far in front of his arm. Not too shabby overall, though.

RPG is numberwang.

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Scruffs
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Posted: 03 October 2005 at 5:19pm

yea, i did have some trouble with cloud's hair. I think it looked like his back was facing us because the armor plate on his shoulder is in front of the cape. and thanks for all the comments

here's a non FF character but the same style: The Grim Reaper

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Scruffs Midshipman Joined: 13 September 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 79	Topic: final fantasy guys Posted: 01 October 2005 at 7:03pm
	Squall from FF Cloud from FF tell me what you think Edited by Scruffs
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Filax_666 Commander Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108	Posted: 01 October 2005 at 11:27pm
	i think they look kinda confusing maybe you should keep them simple in the beginning and then try to put some details. for exemple: cloud, although hes lookin to the right (hes looking to the right isnt he?) looks like turning his back on us....it looks kinda weird. also their pants look confusing, especially squalls ones. probably with some work youll get them perfect, you just got to find the right way to show all those details without confusing the whole thing...
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acrylicana Midshipman Joined: 06 September 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 41	Posted: 02 October 2005 at 4:49pm
	I like them. I don't find them confusing at all..f course it might depend on your monitor size and resolution. Cloud doesn't look like his back if facing us..what are you talking about Filax? (confused). I think you should work on more FF characters.
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Scruffs Midshipman Joined: 13 September 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 79	Posted: 02 October 2005 at 5:09pm
	thanks acrylica ill be sure to do that my brother made the same comment as you, Filax, so i know what you mean. I think it's because of his left shoulder but im not really sure.
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Wannahlakujuu Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 03 October 2005 at 12:03pm
	It's because of the cape, or atleast thats what i think. Good job though
	I am Spartacus
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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994	Posted: 03 October 2005 at 2:48pm
	It looks like his hair goes down too low on Cloud, and the body looks too far in front of his arm. Not too shabby overall, though.
	RPG is numberwang.
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Scruffs Midshipman Joined: 13 September 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 79	Posted: 03 October 2005 at 5:19pm
	yea, i did have some trouble with cloud's hair. I think it looked like his back was facing us because the armor plate on his shoulder is in front of the cape. and thanks for all the comments here's a non FF character but the same style: The Grim Reaper
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