Pixel Joint Forum: Luxus from Fairy Tail

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This is something I made yesterday because I'm a big fan of the manga >.<
I was hoping I could get help from you guys because it doesn't seem good at all lol. Well it's Luxus from Fairy Tail during his coup/festival arc. Thanks in advance for anyone taking the time to help me.

UPDATE

Also here are a few reference pictures
http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m15/Asumasfire/LuxusFairyTail.jpg
http://www.onemanga.com/Fairy_Tail/126/07/

Edited by Shaka the Tempest - 16 July 2009 at 9:58am

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Shaka the Tempest Seaman Joined: 09 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18	Topic: Luxus from Fairy Tail Posted: 15 July 2009 at 3:19pm
	This is something I made yesterday because I'm a big fan of the manga >.< I was hoping I could get help from you guys because it doesn't seem good at all lol. Well it's Luxus from Fairy Tail during his coup/festival arc. Thanks in advance for anyone taking the time to help me. UPDATE Also here are a few reference pictures http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m15/Asumasfire/LuxusFairyTail.jpg http://www.onemanga.com/Fairy_Tail/126/07/ Edited by Shaka the Tempest - 16 July 2009 at 9:58am
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God_Is_Evil Midshipman Joined: 11 March 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 97	Posted: 15 July 2009 at 3:54pm
	Try redrawing his head at the same angle that his body is at. or try drawing his head to be a little larger.
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Shaka the Tempest Seaman Joined: 09 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18	Posted: 15 July 2009 at 5:12pm
	>.< thank you, I'll get right on it
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 15 July 2009 at 9:06pm
	use anatomy references when working, the abs and pecs look wonky. also give it highlights, and as has been said, make the head larger.
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Shaka the Tempest Seaman Joined: 09 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18	Posted: 16 July 2009 at 10:01am
	Thanks ^^ I updated the sprite, should I also add more highlights on his abs? Or take some away in general?
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 16 July 2009 at 12:31pm
	contrast is too high on those abs, head still needs to be a bit bigger. the musculature overall still needs work, especially the arm. muscle are arranged much more fluidly than this sprite, as well.
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