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Quote ZmanZ Replybullet Topic: Woohoo My joint room...
    Posted: 29 September 2005 at 4:56pm

http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/6067.htm

Yeah, I have no clue where to submit this so if someone high up sees this, yeah.. help me out

If it is exepted for The Joint, can it be on Level 2,Position 3, cause its Vacant

 

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Quote pixelblink Replybullet Posted: 29 September 2005 at 8:02pm
you should really be posting the image here before you submit it because it needs some work before being approved.
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Quote ZmanZ Replybullet Posted: 30 September 2005 at 12:02pm

Oops sorry I'm new,

Ok How can I Improve this..

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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 30 September 2005 at 2:09pm

Don't be sorry, it's not a requierement to post things here before you submit to the gallery, but being new to pixel art, it will help you to get some feedback so that the piece you submit to the gallery is perfect

hmm... It looks a little plain, you've got the basic furniture and necessities, but I suggest adding more details, like the mouse on the desk, maybe a few papers.  How about a few pictures on the wall? because it looks pretty empty..

Another thing, is that the legs on the table are very thick, one thicker than the other too, try making them about 2 pixels in width each.. unless that's what your table really looks like, then just even them out

 

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Quote zi-double Replybullet Posted: 30 September 2005 at 4:21pm

shadows ...

and

details ...

 

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Quote ZmanZ Replybullet Posted: 07 October 2005 at 12:43pm

I updated it with some shadows and more details

 



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Quote PandaPlanet Replybullet Posted: 07 October 2005 at 2:56pm

I think he ment adding texture to your objects.
The wood doesn't exactly look like wood :p
Nor does the bed look very comfortable to sleep in.
I suggest you have a look on the internet for tutorials on that or perhaps someone on the forum can help you at.
(I'm jsut a starter myself so I do'nt know that much about texturing ;))

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Quote ZmanZ Replybullet Posted: 09 October 2005 at 10:48am
Originally posted by PandaPlanet

I think he ment adding texture to your objects.
The wood doesn't exactly look like wood :p
Nor does the bed look very comfortable to sleep in.
I suggest you have a look on the internet for tutorials on that or perhaps someone on the forum can help you at.
(I'm jsut a starter myself so I do'nt know that much about texturing ;))

when i tried textureing the wood it turned out really bad, ugh this is so flusterating

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