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camlio
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Quote camlio Replybullet Topic: help with ISO house
    Posted: 21 August 2009 at 12:59pm


i hate my grass and the tree
what do you say?
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 21 August 2009 at 2:13pm
that a sequoia?
colors are too saturated. House is... pretty small. perhaps even taller than it is wide?
Purple Rain(water)?
less black outlines, especially on insular edges.
search the forum for other grass topics, or look through the tutorials on the site. Basically spray can appearance=bad.
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Quote Wattsie1993 Replybullet Posted: 21 August 2009 at 4:54pm
The fence if you compare it to the house is a little larger than expected, as is the mailbox. Your walkway is also rather wide. Pavements are usually 2 or 3 slabs wide. I also agree that the colours are too saturated, try toning them down a little.
Also, experiment with shapes, im sure you could make one side of the house differently shaped and then construct the rest from that. Another thing i see is the grass around the tree. To me that just looks like scribbles, if you add definition to it, shading ect, then you could make it look more 3D. I would shorten it a little though, may be a bit to tall.
Other than that i'd say its a good try, you know the rules of isometrics and i can see you have idea's. Keep working on it!
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