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Antifarea
Commander
Joined: 09 May 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 181 |
![]() Topic: Social Damage Pixel Art WIPPosted: 07 September 2009 at 5:09pm |
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I will be updating this thread as soon as I keep doing more stuff... I need some pointers, and help to try to come up with each sprite both static and the small animated ones for this Halloween shooting game I'm making...
I would go on details about the game, but as I keep posting pictures I'll keep talking about it. Please, if you plan to help me anytime with any comments let it be over these works, since it's a lot important to me for many reasons... one of them is that all characters are modeled after real life friends... I just have to make them cartoons XD On this specific pose, is the static sprite that will be used for character selection, and this is one of the costumes (very unfinished) of the main character, that goes by the alias of Social damage. She is supposed to wear black tight jeans with black converse sneakers, and some other stuff like two belts, etc below... I haven't done them, well for now I need pointers on her left leg (our right) and the position of the gun (gun is 0% complete btw lol)... let me know about any anatomy akwardness... please look at the pose of the top since it's the most finished one. ![]() Also, I would like to give the anime look but with a tone of realism when it comes to the shading and final colors... do you have any pointers for that? please link me somewhere cause I have had issues trying to make other pieces look real despite some observation I have had from other pieces of people in here. Thanks in advance, I'll put you in the special thanks of the game credits. The game is freeware btw, and it will be released on oct. 31st 2009 obviously. Edited by Antifarea - 08 September 2009 at 3:18am |
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Emtch
Midshipman
Joined: 17 September 2008 Location: Sweden Online Status: Offline Posts: 67 |
![]() Posted: 11 September 2009 at 4:49am |
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It's very hard to give critique in such an early state, since there is almost nothing to critique.
Fix the shading on her breasts, it looks very weird now. You could also make her arms less tubeshaped, and change the pose to something less Michael-Jackson-air-humping. The hand holding the gun/hairdryer/axe/whatever-it-is looks really painful and out of perspective. I can make an edit later if I get the time. |
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