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Quote Splocket Replybullet Topic: Excalibur's Secret (WIP)
    Posted: 12 September 2009 at 1:57pm
Hello everyone,

Here's my second attempt at a pixel art piece. Feedback and tips would be great!




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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 12 September 2009 at 7:55pm
Not a bad start. Try to develop your shapes a little more. Cartoony is fine if that's what you are going for but definition, contrast and being less boxy with your characters will help the piece.
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Quote Splocket Replybullet Posted: 12 September 2009 at 10:19pm
Alright, thanks for the advice.
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