Pixel Joint Forum: Which Witch is Which? -Updated Again..-

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Edit:I am working I swear
Edit again: I hated the original skin color XD
Is this style of eye ok or should I trash it?

Mods if you have to link this out ok....This is how I do my projects. This is the first project I have ever posted this early on...Why this early? Because I need you to catch blatant problems....This is my new layout...I want it to rule. And I need to put my tablet down.

YAY for harlots

Edited by Cryssy

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Cryssy Midshipman Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Topic: Which Witch is Which? -Updated Again..- Posted: 06 September 2005 at 10:17pm
	Edit:I am working I swear Edit again: I hated the original skin color XD Is this style of eye ok or should I trash it? Mods if you have to link this out ok....This is how I do my projects. This is the first project I have ever posted this early on...Why this early? Because I need you to catch blatant problems....This is my new layout...I want it to rule. And I need to put my tablet down. YAY for harlots Edited by Cryssy
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EyeCraft Commander Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 425	Posted: 07 September 2005 at 3:45am
	Wow cool. This will look great when finished. Nice line art is always a pleasure. Her left eyebrow seems somewhat out of place though, I think its to do with the eyes. I mean the lower eyebrow would make the eye slightly shorter, because the skin isnt stretched unlike the raised one, try it in the mirror..
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randomblink Commander Joined: 13 February 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 403	Posted: 07 September 2005 at 7:07am
	Very interesting...
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Cryssy Midshipman Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 07 September 2005 at 8:48am
	Thanks eyecraft. You always give great CC :)
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EyeCraft Commander Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 425	Posted: 07 September 2005 at 9:19pm
	You're welcome . Sometimes I think I nitpick though
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Saboteur Commander Joined: 29 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 888	Posted: 07 September 2005 at 9:50pm
	Hey, I think we all think that. You don't, not from what I see, at least. Pleeeeeease don't keep the mirrored hand. This is looking like its gonna turn out to be a nice peice, and personally I think the mirrored hand would take from it a little. Actually, it might not look too bad, cause you're probably going to work with a set lightsource... but I still think it's a good idea to not have it mirrored. And hey, if you wanted to be nitpicky, you could point out that the smirk would probably raise the bottom left edge of the (our) right eye a pixel or two
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SpectreNectar Midshipman Joined: 30 October 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 09 September 2005 at 8:09am
	Shouldn't she be looking at the sphere?
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inkspot Commander Joined: 05 May 2005 Location: Estonia Online Status: Offline Posts: 452	Posted: 09 September 2005 at 2:02pm
	head shape, circle, square and hands are mirrored :D
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Cryssy Midshipman Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 09 September 2005 at 3:17pm
	*Originally posted by inkspot* head shape, circle, square and hands are mirrored :D Umm if you can't give suggestions please don't post or even state the obvious.. :D Btw the circle isn't mirrored, there is a circle tool ;) Spectre: I haven't drawn the pupils yet :) Edited by Cryssy
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Citizen_Insane Commander Joined: 30 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 189	Posted: 09 September 2005 at 5:14pm
	*Originally posted by inkspot* head shape, circle, square and hands are mirrored :D I'm not sure if this is even a comment.. I've been holding out on crits because it's still really basic... I keep checking back to see if you have more of it done... how's it coming along? I agree that you should probably try drawing two different hands, just to switch it up a bit.. but it might not even matter.
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Cryssy Midshipman Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 09 September 2005 at 5:22pm
	I am working on a step two to this. But I want a little more done for her first.
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Citizen_Insane Commander Joined: 30 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 189	Posted: 10 September 2005 at 12:35am
	ah.. no rush, then. take your time.
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EyeCraft Commander Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: Australia Online Status: Offline Posts: 425	Posted: 10 September 2005 at 10:53pm
	Nice update! Glad to see you're still moving along with it . The eye colour I think is great, but I think you could be doing more with them, it seems like just blocks of colour and lines over it in a way. That white line seems to look unnatural or something. Try going for a more reflective kind of eye if you want, I think that'd look great. Skin shading seems very smooth at this point, I'd just advise be mindful of the bones. Keep it up!
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Filax_666 Commander Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108	Posted: 12 September 2005 at 8:15am
	Maybe you could put some reflexes on the right part of the iris and of the white part of the eye (thats where the light comes from right?) and erase that white line at the bottom of the black part. Otherwise is fantastic. Keep up. Edited by Filax_666
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Filax_666 Commander Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108	Posted: 26 September 2005 at 1:56pm
	i was realy looking forward to see some improvement here i know these things take their time but i still think you've probably done somethin n all this time... im just sayin this cause its a project i was realy loving to see and its been stopped for about 2 weeks...
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Ensellitis Commander Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099	Posted: 27 September 2005 at 2:15pm
	She is like me, she got caught up in other projects... Lots to do. Edited by Ensellitis
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Filax_666 Commander Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108	Posted: 28 September 2005 at 8:45am
	Yeah, i understand she probably has lotsa things to do...i was just sayin im hoping she shows us us some improvement soon, cause i was loving this...
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Cryssy Midshipman Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 23 October 2005 at 11:01am
	hehehehe hope no more Filax ;)
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Wannahlakujuu Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 23 October 2005 at 1:36pm
	Nice update. The smile is a little awkward and looks a little unnatural. I have trouble with that too the shading on the lips looks nice though, and I am liking this a lot, just work on the shape of the lips. edit: on second thought, maybe you don't even need the lips, or maybe just making them thinner. In stuff this style you can't really see defined lips. I think maybe them not being so red and being thinner would improve it a lot. Edited by Wannahlakujuu
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 23 October 2005 at 4:19pm
	yeah, i think thin lips would add a better effect of scaryness as opposed to slutty red-lipstickness , this is coming along nicely can wait for another update
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Cryssy Midshipman Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 23 October 2005 at 4:27pm
	Can someone explain what you mean about the lips? I am willing to try things but I just am not understanding....this isn't really supposed to be scary
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 23 October 2005 at 4:29pm
	i think they should be a bit thinner, they are very well shaded, but you cold try a few different shapes
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Cryssy Midshipman Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 23 October 2005 at 5:01pm
	ok cartoonish or realish?
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 23 October 2005 at 5:37pm
	realsih, but try and stay with that cool style you've already got goin on.
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Cryssy Midshipman Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 23 October 2005 at 5:52pm
	well I am trying to merge cartoony, realistic, and animeish into one style because I draw that way pixels are a little different from paper
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 23 October 2005 at 6:04pm
	well im digging it
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Cryssy Midshipman Joined: 03 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 94	Posted: 23 October 2005 at 6:50pm
	I am working on it expect an update sometime tonight
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Wannahlakujuu Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 205	Posted: 24 October 2005 at 2:25pm
	Yes shark said it a little better than I did the lips should look real, but anime-ish as you said. can't wait for the update. edit: and while it is not really supposed to be scary, the thin lips would add to the mysterious sortof eerie feel to the pic. Edited by Wannahlakujuu
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