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   hoi,

i work on a new picture. now i need some help with the leaves and

the wood and at the other things.

Can somebody help me?

Edited by bitswitcher - 25 January 2010 at 6:59am

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bitswitcher Midshipman Joined: 26 November 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 45	Topic: Angels Posted: 24 January 2010 at 1:03pm
	hoi, i work on a new picture. now i need some help with the leaves and the wood and at the other things. Can somebody help me? Edited by bitswitcher - 25 January 2010 at 6:59am
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bitswitcher Midshipman Joined: 26 November 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 45	Posted: 25 January 2010 at 6:46am
	better?
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RollerKingdom Commander Joined: 11 January 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 388	Posted: 25 January 2010 at 12:56pm
	The background is awesome :D love the clouds but the angels could use a better and cleaner shading imo.
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SHANN0N Midshipman Joined: 20 July 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 54	Posted: 26 January 2010 at 3:30pm
	The bubbles you used to shade the trees and clouds worked quite well but you can't shade the angels in the same way, or at least not without some serious adjustments. The shading flattens them a lot because you didn't really pay much attention to the shape of the face, for instance. The forehead is more raised, and the cheeks are puffy whereas the nose dips and the nostrils are defined. You missed that detail which is the thing that will make the difference between a really good piece and an ok piece. The clouds and little tree are fantastic looking and the angels just dont seem to match their quality. I made you a super quick edit so its obviously not all it could be but just to give you an idea of what I mean
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