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Uriah
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Quote Uriah Replybullet Topic: Nocturnal Nature [WIP]
    Posted: 06 May 2010 at 7:17pm
My newest piece!
I'm getting better if you have stayed with me.
 
I just scribbled it out on the paint I was inspired by a dark nature piece on another Fighting Forum. Mine came out just as good as theirs, and mine is in the ugly stage :)
I'll be working on it until I feel it is perfected. (which is never) which means I will be working on it FOREVER!
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 06 May 2010 at 10:27pm
the image seems to consist of hills in the foreground, but no background. there should be some sort of horizon line, as right now it appears as if this is the edge of the world.
also the tree could use some work, maybe more of a cylinder than a cone for the trunk. For the leaves, a large uniform blob is never good, maybe try drawing the limbs then adding leaf clusters.
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