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Gnarizard
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Joined: 13 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
![]() Topic: Hellish (3col)Posted: 07 May 2010 at 1:36am |
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I wanted to try something with 4 colors, but I ended up only using 3.
I went with different shades of the same color, basically, and this is what I came up with: (regular top-left, 2x zoom on bottom) ![]() It's supposed to look as though there is ground right in front (bottom) with lava illuminating the rocky bits, and then a sea of lava behind that, and then a dark, mountainous area with flames (spewing smoke). Now clearly if I have to describe the piece, I've screwed up royally. What I'd like to know, is what I could do to make this piece look better. So constructive C&C, everyone! PS: I realize this concept has probably been done to death. My apologies in advance. |
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onek
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Joined: 19 May 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 416 |
![]() Posted: 07 May 2010 at 6:12am |
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maybe an edit helps
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Gnarizard
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Joined: 13 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
![]() Posted: 07 May 2010 at 5:55pm |
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Oh wow, that's almost exactly what I originally had in mind!
![]() Yours has more believable depth, the dithering is less linear, and the lava looks more like... Well... Lava. I like it! Anyone else have an opinion or perhaps a different take on it? |
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