Howdy andy, glad to have you. The thing is it's awfully small, so there's not much to crit :o There's ony so much you can do with a portrait at this size.

One major problem I see is that his hair and skin blend together too much. On my screen, at 1x zoom, it looks like a solid black head with white eyes and teeth unless I sit forward in my chair and squint a bit. In fact, I think the bright white teeth and eyes are part of the problem--the contrast is making the darks seem even darker and run together.

Edited by Hatch - 01 July 2010 at 10:24am