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    Posted: 19 November 2005 at 7:42pm
EDIT: Got link to work, C&C please. This is my first ever work of pixel
art so yeah. Its for the joint once its done.



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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 19 November 2005 at 8:33pm

 

worked for me :P
got game?
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Quote Raylborn Replybullet Posted: 19 November 2005 at 10:27pm
Yay haha. Now C&C please.
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Quote pixelblink Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2005 at 12:47am

C&C:

  • you saved as a jpg... wrong wrong wrong - you lose quality and colours
  • the table has absolutely zero dimensions. Where are the edges?
  • There's an Escher-eque quality to the bed where it meets the wall
  • the poster isn't pixel art at all as far as I can tell. It looks like you cropped and skewed a picture to fit in there.
  • The computer monitor looks awkward

More things to think about adding:

  • some paint to the walls. Everybody seems to wanna keep the same old blah paint colour
  • some carpet or floor texture
  • some action!

That is all... for now
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Quote Raylborn Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2005 at 7:24am
Im going to fix the poster just didnt have time yet. How would I fix
the table and computer screen?
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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2005 at 8:32am
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Quote Raylborn Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2005 at 12:03pm
Woah thanks man! Could you tell me how you did that so I know in
the future?

And the corner is wrong with the bed right. Hmm how do I fix that?
Also how do I do textures for the carpeting?
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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2005 at 12:53pm

actuallt he table was made wrong to :P

here is a tutorial you might want to see

http://www.zoggles.co.uk/asp/tutorials.asp?tut=1&page=6

 

and this one

http://www.zoggles.co.uk/asp/tutorials.asp?tut=1&page=2

most use the "b" type box
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Quote Raylborn Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2005 at 1:05pm
Updated it.
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Quote Meyu Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2005 at 7:24pm
I like it! It needs some kind of carpet and wall paint, but im new also so
dont have any tips. Maybe someone more experienced could help you?
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Quote Raylborn Replybullet Posted: 20 November 2005 at 10:30pm
Yeah tips on textures and that?

Also what kind of action could I add?
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