Pixel Joint Forum: RGB WIP(kinda has a ring to it)

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   I made this and I'm pretty sure it Isn't gallery material. How can I fix it?They're 2 separate images by the way.

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Oreo0000 Seaman Joined: 12 September 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 17	Topic: RGB WIP(kinda has a ring to it) Posted: 28 October 2010 at 4:03pm
	I made this and I'm pretty sure it Isn't gallery material. How can I fix it?They're 2 separate images by the way.
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 28 October 2010 at 5:46pm
	what are they and what are they for. more information would be helpful in understanding the direction you want to take this.
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yaomon17 Commander Joined: 07 September 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 28 October 2010 at 8:24pm
	What exactly are you trying to accomplish with this concept? If it is a totem pole, you might want to add a few things like arms or wings.
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 28 October 2010 at 10:27pm
	and if it's not a totem pole, but just plain faces, then you may want to make something more directed and interesting (like a totem pole, for example) Edited by cure - 29 October 2010 at 11:53pm
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Zeratanus Commander Joined: 03 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 576	Posted: 29 October 2010 at 7:54am
	You could also try giving each box different textures (one slimy, one metallic, etc) too, if you want to stick to just the boxes.
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yaomon17 Commander Joined: 07 September 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 136	Posted: 29 October 2010 at 11:44pm
	*Originally posted by cure* and if it's not a totem pole, but just plain faces, then you may want to make something more directed and interested (like a totem pole, for example) I lol'd I like the expressions and you can maybe exaggerate them (huge dimples, giant smile, gigantic eyebrows, etc.)
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Oreo0000 Seaman Joined: 12 September 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 17	Posted: 30 October 2010 at 3:54pm
	@cure It was supposed to be abstract. Just 3 faces monochromatic R-G-B.
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 30 October 2010 at 6:09pm
	well i'd either make really interesting faces or adjust the idea so you've got more to work with. this piece reminded me of this WIP, maybe it can yield some ideas.
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 21 May 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 04 November 2010 at 5:14pm
	Actually, this is BGR, =P And I agree with most of the other posts - it's too simple, spruce it up some.
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