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Geoglatico
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Quote Geoglatico Replybullet Topic: What would you change? help me
    Posted: 04 May 2011 at 9:06pm
I started it and liked it, but I think something is missing in your opinion

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Quote tanuki Replybullet Posted: 04 May 2011 at 10:13pm
His left arm looks like it's shorter than the right arm. Try adding very small shadows under his collar. I think there should be more highlight on his shoulders and less on the front of his jacket.

His legs and shoes look good to me.
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