Pixel Joint Forum: Small Portrait

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   Hello i am new to the forums and this is my first sprite that i've made in a very long time. 

he is supposed to be some sort of robot character. The style i am aiming for is the portraits here: 

http://www.spriters-resource.com/genesis/drrobmbm/sheet/5944 

I am looking for some help adjusting things which don't look right and explaining things to me because eventually i want to make a lot of these but i am not quite there yet as you can see.

Leave a comment on it and tell what can be fixed and post an image about it or something. Whatever feedback you can give is helpful. Thanks.

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Scratch_and_Grounder Seaman Joined: 04 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Topic: Small Portrait Posted: 04 July 2011 at 2:02pm
	Hello i am new to the forums and this is my first sprite that i've made in a very long time. he is supposed to be some sort of robot character. The style i am aiming for is the portraits here: http://www.spriters-resource.com/genesis/drrobmbm/sheet/5944 I am looking for some help adjusting things which don't look right and explaining things to me because eventually i want to make a lot of these but i am not quite there yet as you can see. Leave a comment on it and tell what can be fixed and post an image about it or something. Whatever feedback you can give is helpful. Thanks.
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Psychotic_Carp Commander Joined: 02 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1008	Posted: 07 July 2011 at 9:01pm
	sometimes its the small things like the little yellow dot near its neck, the right side of it has a pixel that doesnt look right
	got game?
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