Pixel Joint Forum: Help Man struck.

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   Well, this is a draft I did on paper in college, I watched my drawing in pencil and has played on the computer that he gave, I think the paper was more enjoyable, so I came here I asked for suggestions and tips for you to improve, is at the initial / draft I hope it ends with a great job.

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Identification:

Note 1: Green teeth: They are a type of dirt, he is a guy who comes to your oral health, you can see the position of the teeth as well.

Note 2: His eye has a certain type of cracks, cracks are not is that his eyes are getting red.

I think that's all you have doubts, if they ask more about the piece that I will be here to answer.

Thanks, waiting for the tips of the gods. 

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Juniorps Midshipman Joined: 06 December 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 91	Topic: Help Man struck. Posted: 20 August 2011 at 5:28am
	Well, this is a draft I did on paper in college, I watched my drawing in pencil and has played on the computer that he gave, I think the paper was more enjoyable, so I came here I asked for suggestions and tips for you to improve, is at the initial / draft I hope it ends with a great job. Ask: Identification: Note 1: Green teeth: They are a type of dirt, he is a guy who comes to your oral health, you can see the position of the teeth as well. Note 2: His eye has a certain type of cracks, cracks are not is that his eyes are getting red. I think that's all you have doubts, if they ask more about the piece that I will be here to answer. Thanks, waiting for the tips of the gods.
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ChrisButton Commander Joined: 10 September 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 371	Posted: 20 August 2011 at 6:43pm
	If you're unsure of any terminology I will use, please visit Cure's pixel art tutorial here. You have a good idea of changing the color of your lines - but don't use black. Both pieces have a ton of jaggies, and so the lines aren't 'smooth'. As a result I wouldn't attempt anti-aliasing until afterwards. Inconsistent light source, see the hair and skin. Palette could use some work, try hue shifting to create more visual interest. Could hardly notice the highlight until I zoomed in, you need more contrast. Your lines need should be 1 pixel thickness. Maybe try reducing the size you're working at. Good luck! I cleaned a bit of your lines while still accommodating your style as an example. Edited by ChrisButton - 21 August 2011 at 3:15am
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