| WIP (Work In Progress) | |
| |
|
| Author | Message |
|
Aastikya
Midshipman
Joined: 19 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86 |
![]() Topic: TV WIPPosted: 16 October 2011 at 4:04am |
Hello , this is a TV I made. But I guess it doesn't look good so I need your help to make it better. Thanks for help Edited by Aastikya - 16 October 2011 at 4:04am |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
jalonso
Admiral
Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
![]() Posted: 16 October 2011 at 5:38am |
|
Turn it on.
If you get no reception try using antennas instead of light sabres. |
|
|
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Aastikya
Midshipman
Joined: 19 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86 |
![]() Posted: 16 October 2011 at 6:07am |
|
Lol , are you serious?
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Aastikya
Midshipman
Joined: 19 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86 |
![]() Posted: 16 October 2011 at 6:16am |
|
I want to submit it to PJ gallery
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
SpeedXaaa
Seaman
Joined: 14 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11 |
![]() Posted: 16 October 2011 at 8:00am |
|
What he's saying is that the antennae are way too thick, which I'd have to agree with.
I...don't really know where to start, though, other than suggesting you read This and This thread pretty thoroughly. You got the drop-shadow pretty nicely, but as to where said shadow is located and how it casts, that would mean that the lightsource should be at the top, which it is not. |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Aastikya
Midshipman
Joined: 19 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86 |
![]() Posted: 16 October 2011 at 9:17am |
|
Well I read the noobtorials already. Well , about the shadow thanks for correcting. I took the lightsource wrong if we talk about the drop shadow.
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
jalonso
Admiral
Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
![]() Posted: 16 October 2011 at 9:22am |
|
Originally posted by Aastikya
Lol , are you serious? Dead serious! Turn the channel to I Love Lucy :) Originally posted by Aastikya I want to submit it to PJ gallery Won't be added yet, k. Beside some precision issues making a mid-century TV and omitting dials is unforgivable. |
|
|
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
Aastikya
Midshipman
Joined: 19 September 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86 |
![]() Posted: 16 October 2011 at 10:01am |
This is my reference, sir |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
CELS
Commander
Joined: 23 September 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 758 |
![]() Posted: 16 October 2011 at 10:19am |
|
I'm looking forward to seeing how this turns out.
Anyway, the only thing that really stands out to me is the way you've shaded the legs. Look at the reference pic and notice how the lightest area is a line down the length of the leg, since it's a cone / cylinder shape. In the reference pic, the light source is on the right, so the brightest line on the legs is on the right side of the leg. You've got it opposite (light source on left, legs brighter on right). |
|
IP Logged |
|
|
jalonso
Admiral
Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
![]() Posted: 16 October 2011 at 10:39am |
|
My bad...
...thingies without knobs and buttons are still magic to me... ...understand that I had to walk 8 miles to the only TV in the village... ...ours had knobs as we were so poor :( |
|
|
|
|
IP Logged |
|
|
||
Forum Jump |
You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot create polls in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum |
|