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Quote sasuke91 Replybullet Topic: help with anatomy
    Posted: 13 December 2011 at 4:37am
yeah so i suck at doing full body shots, getting the right angle of the body parts the same ect. :( so i thought id practice on a standard front pose.  i know some parts dont look right but i just cant figure out how to make everything look right. what yous think?
 
 
*Edit* hopefully looks ok now?
 


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Quote dpixel Replybullet Posted: 13 December 2011 at 5:26am
The bottom half(mid torso) looks way too short and narrow.
hehe (ಠ_ಠ ) o_- :p
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Quote Partack Replybullet Posted: 13 December 2011 at 8:48am
shoulders might be too broad for the rest of the body.. i haven't done anatomy in a long time. go google some tutorials. there's a crapload of stuff about sizing for different styles.
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Quote Delicious Replybullet Posted: 13 December 2011 at 1:35pm
Why not use reference to help you? Is this suppose to be on some sort of overhead angle? If not, those legs are incredibly short compared to the neck, head and torso.
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Quote Friend Replybullet Posted: 13 December 2011 at 6:17pm
I haven't even studied anatomy, but just imagining I was the person you created, there are tons of problems.
The head is absolutely ginormous.  Biceps are too thin compared to triceps.  Wrists are too long and the hands are way too small and orblike.  They should be more rectangle in form.  How the torso curves into the waste is way too exaggerated.  Thighs are too thin, and the legs are way way way too short.  The legs are just too small in scale.  The head, torso, and lower body all appear to be of different scale.  The feet are also way too small.

This is just what I see, anyway
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Quote sasuke91 Replybullet Posted: 13 December 2011 at 11:11pm
thanks for your comments guys :) hopefully ive done better now?
 
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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 13 December 2011 at 11:49pm
The human body is normally ~6-7 heads in height. Those legs are still tiny! Is it intentionally so animesque?



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Quote sasuke91 Replybullet Posted: 14 December 2011 at 3:41am
:O thats interesting lol did not know that
 
its weird tho im not sure what i should make longer now?
or if some parts are too long atm? feel free to do a quick edit
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Quote Friend Replybullet Posted: 14 December 2011 at 9:39am
I think the proportions would look more like this:

'sept with probably an even smaller head and bigger feet


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Quote ChrisButton Replybullet Posted: 16 December 2011 at 2:28am
No one seems to be doing it but the hips are just as wide and sometimes
wider than the ribcage (mostly girls). You draw a lot of manga stuff?
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Quote sasuke91 Replybullet Posted: 16 December 2011 at 4:53am
yeah i love all the manga styles :)
mostly the anatomy style in death note, berserk, bleach ect.


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Quote ChrisButton Replybullet Posted: 16 December 2011 at 5:46am
Oh cool. They have pretty realistic anatomy. I think the mangaka uses
real human models to base their drawings off.
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