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Garage Inc.
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   Topic: Apartment 2Posted: 24 April 2005 at 7:22pm |
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I want to thank Blink for helping me out on this one. Now, as for the room, I still need to add 1. People 2. Bartender 3. Objects behind the bar. 4. Some more stuff near the door to make it more interesting. 5. Maybe some things on the walls. Any crits are welcome and wanted. -EDIT- Heres an edit so far.
What do ya'll think I should add? Edited by Garage Inc. |
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iSTVAN
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Posted: 24 April 2005 at 7:35pm |
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Im not really one to crit on isometric pixel art, but I'll give you my thoughts as requested. The bar looks very pretty! Nicely done. It will definately look better with those 5 things you mentioned, but try not to make it TOO crowded. A couple of things: -It looks like theres a one pixel error in the top corner seat. Its a picky thing, but it caught my attention all the same. - Something looked odd, and it took me a while to figure it BUT I think what it was was the inconsistant outline between the doors and the rest of the furniture and stuff in the room. The door seems to be the only thing without the heavy black outline. I'd also wonder what this iso would look like with a bit of anti-aliasing, something I havent seen in many iso pixels. Nice work though! |
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Blueberry_pie
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Posted: 25 April 2005 at 3:09am |
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Originally posted by iSTVAN -It looks like theres a one pixel error in the top corner seat. Its a picky thing, but it caught my attention all the same. I think it's supposed to look like that, so the seats look a bit more curved... Anyway, nice work so far! |
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Rifts
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Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355 |
Posted: 25 April 2005 at 11:37am |
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some sweet pixel art :)
i do however agree that the doors should have a black outline. and i dont know what direction your going for but it might not look that bad crowded with people, it might ive it a crowded bar feeling. anyways just an idea nice so far! |
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Garage Inc.
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Posted: 25 April 2005 at 3:52pm |
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Actually, im going to redo basically the entire piece. Blink sent me a PM saying this isn't really my style, its his. He made an example for me, and if you look at his and mine, it looks like I just changed some of the colors. I'm going to put some soft textures in there and repost.
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pixelblink
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Posted: 25 April 2005 at 11:54pm |
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it's all good in the hood Garage. I just think that you got the texture pattern thing going on and you need to try and incorporate it into a cleaner room. Didn't wanna steal your thunder dude. What I do like that you added were the little stools and cabinet area. looks dope yo |
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Garage Inc.
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Posted: 26 April 2005 at 5:51am |
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Dude, I could never match your iso style. You and I have totally different styles. Thanks for the comments, I will post the finished edit, probobly tonight. |
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Garage Inc.
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Posted: 30 April 2005 at 11:28am |
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Edited the first post with an edit of the room.
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pixelblink
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Posted: 30 April 2005 at 11:41am |
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nice edit dude. The table textures and walls look alot better actually.
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Garage Inc.
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Posted: 30 April 2005 at 12:28pm |
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Thanks. I am still working on the Bar and the Shelves.
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DrunkyDuck
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Joined: 25 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
Posted: 30 April 2005 at 12:49pm |
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Great room dude, I just love the texturing.
I hope you don't mind me making a small edit without the black outlines: 
Can't wait to see it with those little peeps, and don't to forget to add some booze to the shelves behind the bar. Keep it up. |
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Garage Inc.
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Posted: 30 April 2005 at 3:26pm |
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Thanks for the edit, but the black outlines seem to give it more depth. Your edit looks pretty cool, but I think i'm gonna stick with mine. Great job though.
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sugarbyte
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Posted: 03 May 2005 at 11:39am |
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I really like this!! I find it very classy and i like the colors you chose :) If I were to reccomend anything, it would be to add maybe a poster, or a paiting on one of the walls just to add a more lively feeling. But besides that its great :) good job
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Blueberry_pie
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Posted: 03 May 2005 at 1:28pm |
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Originally posted by sugarbyte I really like this!! I find it very classy and i like the colors you chose :) If I were to reccomend anything, it would be to add maybe a poster, or a paiting on one of the walls just to add a more lively feeling. But besides that its great :) good job Yeah, that's a good idea... And perhaps you could also add some neon sign saying CAFE or BAR or something? |
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Garage Inc.
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Posted: 03 May 2005 at 7:06pm |
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Both great ideas. I will start those tonight probobly. |
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pixelblink
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Posted: 25 May 2005 at 9:17pm |
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when are you going to finalize & submit this into the gallery so we can put it in The Joint?
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Garage Inc.
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Posted: 25 May 2005 at 10:12pm |
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Crap, I totally forgot about this, haha. I will try to finish it up tomorrow. Thanks for reminding me, |
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sedgemonkey
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Posted: 06 June 2005 at 11:10am |
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I think Garage Inc forgot about this one again. Pie's idea for a neon sign would be cool fo sho. |
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Garage Inc.
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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 7:03am |
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Alright, Ill finish this up tonight when I get home. Haha.
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Garage Inc.
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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 7:11pm |
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I lied, I dont know if I'm going to finish this. I'm kinda tired of it...
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sedgemonkey
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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 9:24pm |
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That's too bad. You've got a nice start here... if you just added some peeps and a couple things on the wall you'd be set.
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Garage Inc.
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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 11:55pm |
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Ya, but those couple of things on the wall were boring, haha. I might do a more exciting room later. Not sure. |
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sedgemonkey
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Posted: 25 August 2005 at 9:29am |
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Dang Garage Inc... forgot you went so far on this room. Just throw a drunkard or two about the place and submit it. |
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Garage Inc.
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Posted: 26 August 2005 at 2:43pm |
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Sedge, I basically stopped pixeling for now, so, I don't think I'll be finishing this anytime soon. Who knows, maybe in the future, but for now, I don't see it happening.
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Posted: 07 September 2005 at 10:29am |
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I LOVE that color scheme!!!!
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