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    Posted: 02 March 2012 at 7:49am
Hello pixel artists, I need help in a job.It's for a weekly event in pixelaria.org. I was trying to make a volcano to represent the fire element. No need to edit a sudden, just tell me if it was good in parts, if you can make a sketch.



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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2012 at 7:50am
If you make a sketch, will be based on inspiration.
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2012 at 9:34am
So make a volcano, and then we'll critique it. What do you want us to critique right now? "Fire here"? Have a little something to show before you start a thread.
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2012 at 9:52am
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So make a volcano, and then we'll critique it. What do you want us to critique right now? "Fire here"? Have a little something to show before you start a thread.


I'm working on it, but I just wanted to show what I'll do in future editions. I'm sorry. :]
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2012 at 12:14pm


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Quote Delicious Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2012 at 12:25pm
Doesn't read as a volcano to me. The gradient type shading you are going for does not work well for a volcano which is has a ton of texture. Try looking at references to help you have a better understanding of what a volcano should look like.
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 02 March 2012 at 4:35pm
Originally posted by Delicious

Doesn't read as a volcano to me. The gradient type shading you are going for does not work well for a volcano which is has a ton of texture. Try looking at references to help you have a better understanding of what a volcano should look like.

Thanks for the tips, I will finish this work today.
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 03 March 2012 at 10:47am

Finished. Thanks for all! Specially for .Planet (Merez)
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 03 March 2012 at 11:33am
you've only just posted a real attempt at it, and you're cutting off feedback and calling it finished already?
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Quote reis Replybullet Posted: 03 March 2012 at 3:25pm
Originally posted by cure

you've only just posted a real attempt at it, and you're cutting off feedback and calling it finished already?


I had the time to end it and could not arrange time WIP, started this pixel art on Thursday, and still managed to send the missing pixel art 4 minutes to form the event expires. I'll do a remake of it next week editing it and posting progress on this topic. But I think I was good at what I expected.

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