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MIERDINSKY
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cure
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What's too say? Looks too early to give real critique on. Clean up the lines and finalize the forms.
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MIERDINSKY
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![]() ![]() Edited by MIERDINSKY - 11 March 2012 at 2:09pm |
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cure
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just post your most current version, we can't analyze or edit it if it's only on the screen for a fraction of a second.
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MIERDINSKY
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MIERDINSKY
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![]() ![]() ![]() Edited by MIERDINSKY - 11 March 2012 at 7:16pm |
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cure
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Just use the 'edit' button to update your post, instead of double posting.
I think you should get rid of all the dithering and focus on blocking in proper shading right now. The light source seems confused, like it is comping from multiple directions (from above, from the right, from the viewer's direction). There's a lot of pillow-shading going on. |
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Partack
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PAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! creepy. that's all I can say about this piece. good luck xD
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MIERDINSKY
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![]() ![]() ![]() Edited by MIERDINSKY - 13 March 2012 at 8:55am |
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