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DrunkyDuck
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 25 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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![]() That's it, just wanted to show you the progress so far, there will be more details added in the future, just wanted to take a small break from it. Edited by DrunkyDuck |
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Reaching out to embrace the random.
Reaching out to embrace whatever may come. I embrace my desire to swing on the spiral of our divinity and still be a human. |
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pixelblink
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865 |
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can't see anything. You must put in proper img tag for us to see it
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DrunkyDuck
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 25 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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How about now? It was blank for me too, but got it to work with the
right click> view image option in firefox. IE user could try
dragging and dropping on the link bar.
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sedgemonkey
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669 |
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I can see it if I cut and paste it into the URL bar. Maybe it's the web host. In any case... I like the rocker setup. You'll have to make sure to add some groupies. |
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DrunkyDuck
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 25 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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Yeah, it was the host, now the bandwith's exceeded.
First post's updated with the same pic now hosted at photobucket. Expect a new version when I get from coledge (sp). |
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pixelblink
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865 |
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looks like a good start.. maybe do something with the walls and something with that empty floor space
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Garage Inc.
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 20 October 2021 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 318 |
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Pretty cool, but as a drummer, I noticed a few problems. 1. This was the obvious one. The bass drum is out of perspective to the rest of the set. 2. Theres no toms. 3. (He might just have his arms up in the air, but if they were actually playing,) you would need to add another cymbal closer to the snare. Because since his hands are in the air, it looks as if he's about to come down on 2 crashes. 4. The drummer looks exactly like the guitar player... 5. No bass player?
Those are just what I saw. This could be an awsome piece. Just add a couple things, change a few things, and this could be a crazy room. Great start. |
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For every second spent wondering if you can do something, you could spend 2 seconds doing it.
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DrunkyDuck
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 25 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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Thanks for the comments, here's the first edit:
![]() I know that the characters blend in with the background at the moment, but I'll fix that later tweaking saturation between them. Garage Inc.: The bass drum is actually facing the person viewing the picture. I'm aware that the bass player is missing, he will be added, with mike on the stage and a bunch of wires. I know the drumkit looks crappy in general, but it's hard to do with resolution this small. Sedgemonkey: Mmmm, groupies. Gonna try adding them in the next version. |
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nivermind
Seaman ![]() Joined: 15 April 2005 Location: Northern Ireland Online Status: Offline Posts: 21 |
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cool walls
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pixel art newbe but photoshop god
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Garage Inc.
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 20 October 2021 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 318 |
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Good point about the resolution. Thats a pretty sweet idea. Great job so far.
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For every second spent wondering if you can do something, you could spend 2 seconds doing it.
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sedgemonkey
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669 |
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It really is shaping up nicely. The colorful backdrop and rearranged figures work much better.
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pixelblink
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865 |
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looks better. Are those love beads on the doorway?
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DrunkyDuck
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 25 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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Thanks for the comments, here's a new (final?) version:
![]() I: -lowered the background's saturation -changed the love bead entrance -added a rock chick -added shadows under the characters. What do you think? |
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Reaching out to embrace the random.
Reaching out to embrace whatever may come. I embrace my desire to swing on the spiral of our divinity and still be a human. |
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pixelblink
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865 |
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looks good to me dude
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Ghrey
Seaman ![]() ![]() Joined: 23 April 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 11 |
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I think you should have the people standing in front of the band with
their arms up kinda like the drummer, to show that their havin a rockin
time. Right now it looks like they are robots. other than that, it
looks great!
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DrunkyDuck
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 25 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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Thanks for the comments, I'm done with it now, added some more shading, one new character, modified some of the old characters and added some cables to the stage. Here's the image:
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Reaching out to embrace the random.
Reaching out to embrace whatever may come. I embrace my desire to swing on the spiral of our divinity and still be a human. |
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sedgemonkey
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669 |
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This turned out great! If you're done with your piece go ahead and submit it to the gallery so we can add it to the project... |
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pixelblink
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865 |
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looks wicked dude
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DrunkyDuck
Midshipman ![]() ![]() Joined: 25 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
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Thanks for the feedback, I uploaded the pic to the gallery.
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Reaching out to embrace the random.
Reaching out to embrace whatever may come. I embrace my desire to swing on the spiral of our divinity and still be a human. |
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