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newGuy
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Quote newGuy Replybullet Topic: Dinosaur and Cactus (yeah that's right)
    Posted: 01 April 2012 at 4:48pm
Hey!

I've been kinda working on these two guys:
       

But I'm not quite happy with them (specifically, I believe palette and readability could be improved, but criticism regarding the overal design or pixelling of them is also very welcome.)

ADDITIONALLY, I'd like some help/references regarding the animation of a walk cycle for the dinosaur dude, and a comic/funny idle for the catcus bro.

...Please?

Edited by newGuy - 01 April 2012 at 4:49pm
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Quote crozier Replybullet Posted: 06 April 2012 at 7:27am
A readability error I see is the dark green arround the eyes/mouth messes with the eyes/mouth themself. On the dino the lines are not 100% refined. Specifically on the bottem half. There also is some AA on the upper half of the dino (under the black outline). This is unessassary.
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