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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Topic: WIP - Pxile title screen
    Posted: 17 April 2012 at 1:48pm
Hey guys, here I go again!

The water is elk's new piece he is working. Ref:
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/68976.htm

Edited by philippejugnet - 21 April 2012 at 6:47am
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Quote Cyangmou Replybullet Posted: 18 April 2012 at 3:26am
To have a reference is nice, although a big thing is that you should use the right references too. I think it looks rather more like a quiet lake than a lake surrounded by waterfalls (?).
Also a Triskelion is a symbol with 3 spirals, It seems more that you try to do something Ammonite-like, but however, it's to small and the environment draws completely away the attention.
At the moment it doesn't feel like you have a consequent idea or you just putting stuff together without exactly knowing what you want to do.
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 18 April 2012 at 5:20am
Okay, this is what I mean.

http://images.wikia.com/merlin1/images/a/a6/Triskelion_single_s04e04.png

http://yuki-pedia.com/images/M4x04Triskelion.jpg

http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111024004031/merlin1/images/1/10/Triskelion_whole_s04e04.png

old version but with all the triskelion parts:

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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 18 April 2012 at 3:40pm
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 19 April 2012 at 8:51am
Please help me!!!
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Quote stustaff Replybullet Posted: 19 April 2012 at 8:58am
I dont knoe pixel art but the waterfall edge is wrong look at pictures of waterfalls thee water almost always flls from a straight edge, multiple falls may be at different angles but will always be on a straight line, your s looks too curved to me.
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 19 April 2012 at 11:58am
Well, this is what I meant.
http://www.globosapiens.net/data/gallery/ts/pictures_468/--tunesia--tozeur--id=31678.jpg

I will change its title, soon you will se why =)
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Quote stustaff Replybullet Posted: 19 April 2012 at 2:15pm
I know what it is now, been looking at latest and previous, it's the left most 'split' its quite severe and my mind needs to see more of the black rock sticking out and probably above and in front of the far left stream of water.
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Quote Elk Replybullet Posted: 20 April 2012 at 1:21am
hi philippe, dont go for such a horizontal approach, viewing from your perspective and as you did the water right now, it doesnt look organic enough!
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 20 April 2012 at 8:53am
@Elk, hi alex, yeah its true, I will fix it in the next update.
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Quote Elk Replybullet Posted: 20 April 2012 at 2:00pm
very good that you got rid of the outlines, looks way better now :P maybe add a slight reflection on the stones edges so you see that the light is having an impact on the stones wet structure, think of it

the stones must be wet, even though they arnt in the water, the air is like really really dense xD
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 21 April 2012 at 6:56am
@elk yeah thanks =) just posting a3um's edit on the water and waterfall.



he is an such amazing person thanks for all man.
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 21 April 2012 at 9:34am
what about this?

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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 21 April 2012 at 2:49pm
2 more hours of work and I think I will be finished =)

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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 21 April 2012 at 5:17pm
finished it


http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/69825.htm
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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 21 April 2012 at 7:17pm
Nice foam, but I think the rest of the water is a bit scratchy. Also the waterfall(s) don't seem to be making an impact 'cos there's no ripples coming from them.

You're improving fast, kudos!
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 22 April 2012 at 3:55pm
thanks =) I am gonna do it =)))
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Quote Roundeye Replybullet Posted: 24 April 2012 at 2:21pm
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