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philippejugnet
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Joined: 27 February 2026 Online Status: Offline Posts: 461 |
![]() Topic: WIP - Pxile title screenPosted: 17 April 2012 at 1:48pm |
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Hey guys, here I go again!
The water is elk's new piece he is working. Ref: http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/68976.htm Edited by philippejugnet - 21 April 2012 at 6:47am |
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Cyangmou
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![]() Posted: 18 April 2012 at 3:26am |
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To have a reference is nice, although a big thing is that you should use the right references too. I think it looks rather more like a quiet lake than a lake surrounded by waterfalls (?).
Also a Triskelion is a symbol with 3 spirals, It seems more that you try to do something Ammonite-like, but however, it's to small and the environment draws completely away the attention. At the moment it doesn't feel like you have a consequent idea or you just putting stuff together without exactly knowing what you want to do. |
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philippejugnet
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![]() Posted: 18 April 2012 at 5:20am |
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Okay, this is what I mean.
http://images.wikia.com/merlin1/images/a/a6/Triskelion_single_s04e04.png http://yuki-pedia.com/images/M4x04Triskelion.jpg http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111024004031/merlin1/images/1/10/Triskelion_whole_s04e04.png old version but with all the triskelion parts:
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philippejugnet
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![]() Posted: 18 April 2012 at 3:40pm |
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philippejugnet
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![]() Posted: 19 April 2012 at 8:51am |
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Please help me!!!
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stustaff
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Joined: 19 April 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
![]() Posted: 19 April 2012 at 8:58am |
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I dont knoe pixel art but the waterfall edge is wrong look at pictures of waterfalls thee water almost always flls from a straight edge, multiple falls may be at different angles but will always be on a straight line, your s looks too curved to me.
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philippejugnet
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![]() Posted: 19 April 2012 at 11:58am |
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Well, this is what I meant.
http://www.globosapiens.net/data/gallery/ts/pictures_468/--tunesia--tozeur--id=31678.jpg I will change its title, soon you will se why =) |
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stustaff
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Joined: 19 April 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
![]() Posted: 19 April 2012 at 2:15pm |
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I know what it is now, been looking at latest and previous, it's the left most 'split' its quite severe and my mind needs to see more of the black rock sticking out and probably above and in front of the far left stream of water.
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Elk
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![]() Posted: 20 April 2012 at 1:21am |
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hi philippe, dont go for such a horizontal approach, viewing from your perspective and as you did the water right now, it doesnt look organic enough!
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philippejugnet
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![]() Posted: 20 April 2012 at 8:53am |
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@Elk, hi alex, yeah its true, I will fix it in the next update.
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Elk
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![]() Posted: 20 April 2012 at 2:00pm |
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very good that you got rid of the outlines, looks way better now :P maybe add a slight reflection on the stones edges so you see that the light is having an impact on the stones wet structure, think of it
the stones must be wet, even though they arnt in the water, the air is like really really dense xD |
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philippejugnet
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![]() Posted: 21 April 2012 at 6:56am |
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@elk yeah thanks =) just posting a3um's edit on the water and waterfall.
he is an such amazing person thanks for all man. |
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philippejugnet
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![]() Posted: 21 April 2012 at 9:34am |
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what about this?
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philippejugnet
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![]() Posted: 21 April 2012 at 2:49pm |
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2 more hours of work and I think I will be finished =)
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philippejugnet
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![]() Posted: 21 April 2012 at 5:17pm |
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finished it
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/69825.htm |
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jeremy
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![]() Posted: 21 April 2012 at 7:17pm |
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Nice foam, but I think the rest of the water is a bit scratchy. Also the waterfall(s) don't seem to be making an impact 'cos there's no ripples coming from them.
You're improving fast, kudos! |
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philippejugnet
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![]() Posted: 22 April 2012 at 3:55pm |
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thanks =) I am gonna do it =)))
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Roundeye
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Joined: 20 April 2012 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3 |
![]() Posted: 24 April 2012 at 2:21pm |
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