Pixel Joint Forum: Could you give me some feedback on this?

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I am sorry if this is in the wrong section, I am fairly new to Pixel Joint. 
Well, I am fairly new to making pixel art, and I would like some opinions on this.
I know that the grass needs more detail, as it looks rather flat at the moment, but is there any thing else that I should change? Thanks for taking the time to read this :)

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Peyton Midshipman Joined: 16 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 47	Topic: Could you give me some feedback on this? Posted: 04 August 2012 at 7:26pm
	I am sorry if this is in the wrong section, I am fairly new to Pixel Joint. Well, I am fairly new to making pixel art, and I would like some opinions on this. I know that the grass needs more detail, as it looks rather flat at the moment, but is there any thing else that I should change? Thanks for taking the time to read this :)
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cjke7777 Seaman Joined: 08 September 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 05 August 2012 at 12:23am
	I'm also new to the forums, but happy to add my 2c. I love the palette, the kind of desaturated colors work well for me. Though, assuming the light source is above, I feel like there needs to be greater contrast between the brown timber work along the front of the house vs the brown tile work on the roof to emphases that it is on-top rather at the front if that makes sense?
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Peyton Midshipman Joined: 16 January 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 47	Posted: 05 August 2012 at 1:10am
	*Originally posted by cjke7777* I'm also new to the forums, but happy to add my 2c. I love the palette, the kind of desaturated colors work well for me. Though, assuming the light source is above, I feel like there needs to be greater contrast between the brown timber work along the front of the house vs the brown tile work on the roof to emphases that it is on-top rather at the front if that makes sense? Makes sense, I will see what I can do :D
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