Pixel Joint Forum: The "tread tank"

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   Hello guys, I'm new here (in the forums and in the pixel art) and I'm creating a tank (of course that is simple), please c&c... It 's not already finished.

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Evil_Genius Seaman Joined: 09 January 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Topic: The "tread tank" Posted: 10 January 2006 at 2:46pm
	Hello guys, I'm new here (in the forums and in the pixel art) and I'm creating a tank (of course that is simple), please c&c... It 's not already finished.
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randomblink Commander Joined: 13 February 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 403	Posted: 10 January 2006 at 2:51pm
	1) It looks too tall 2) Too many turrets on top 3) I like the engine on back, but you should grime it up... Add some rust, some chrome, maybe throw in some smoke 4) The body is WAY too clean 5) The ladder looks like a stack of pegs with space in between Try adding some dimension to the ladder with more shadows, or rust and dirt. Good luck to you tho. Welcome to the board in fact... We are happy to see new members... Peace!
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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 10 January 2006 at 2:53pm
	up the contrast, make it less blocky and add a more definitive lightsource.
	Snark, we love yuu.
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randomblink Commander Joined: 13 February 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 403	Posted: 10 January 2006 at 2:56pm
	um... Yeah, what he said...!
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dr.feng Midshipman Joined: 16 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Posted: 10 January 2006 at 3:08pm
	i guess one of the mainproblems for newbies is to choose the right size for their piece. A 64x32 px tank in 7 colours is bloodyhard work if u want him to look good. a piece in the dimensions u choosed for your tank needs days probably weeks of work and tons of knowledge to make him look real good. my suggestion: start up small, like in the dimensions i told above. :-)
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Evil_Genius Seaman Joined: 09 January 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Posted: 10 January 2006 at 4:10pm
	Thanks! By the way, do you guys have any link to sites with tutorials about creating dust, lighting and etc ?
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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994	Posted: 10 January 2006 at 4:11pm
	http://www.spriteart.com/ Here ya go.
	RPG is numberwang.
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