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artistictiger
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Quote artistictiger Replybullet Topic: Tips/critics needed for W.I.P
    Posted: 25 November 2012 at 4:09pm
hey everyone, sorry i haven't been online in like forever, been so busy, but finally have the time to draw again...
anyway just would like some critic to come in and give me some tips or anything to improve this guy before i start the coloring process.
thanks


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Quote crozier Replybullet Posted: 25 November 2012 at 8:16pm
Lets work our way from his feet (or lack there of) to his head, shall we? You mine as well give him feet. Don't be lazy. His calfs are looking way too bulky compared to his thighs. And his knees should be higher. His stomach could be a little larger/muscular. What is that line at the top of his stomach...? He has no wrist, and the 2nd piece of his arm is part of his hard. The colar-calavicle- bone is supposed to touch the shoulder. The ears are too far up his head. Not sure how it is on hell spawns, but on humans the bottom of the ear is near upper lip area. Top of the head could be a little more circular. But overall the most noticible things are his weird hand-arms.
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Quote artistictiger Replybullet Posted: 26 November 2012 at 12:32pm
well he's not supposed to be really anatomically correct(like most cartoon/unrealistic styles etc)
but i will make his thighs and stomach thicker, fix the ears add some feet(and stop being lazy lol its just its gonna be a litle hard for me cause im using a mouse but i'll figure something out.) will make the top of his head a little more circular as well. thaks for the help.
leaving his arms the same though.
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