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Quote helcril Replybullet Topic: Dancing girl lineart: advices, tips, criticism
    Posted: 25 November 2012 at 6:25pm

Here's my lineart of dancing gymnast girl.
IMO it's pretyy good for my pixeling level, though a have a lot of struggles about completing this work.
1. Not sure about AA. Does it fit here?
2. Palette. Want to make this pic very light, soft and 'flying', but don't know what colors to choose.
3. Background. Something abstract, or no bg?
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Quote Friend Replybullet Posted: 25 November 2012 at 6:49pm
main issue is banding.  You don't seem to understand the concept of AA.  Don't let pixels line up, that is banding and banding is a big no no.  I properly AA'ed your piece for you.  As for the artistic direction of the piece, I'll leave that to you!




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Quote helcril Replybullet Posted: 25 November 2012 at 9:11pm
You're right, about my incompetence in AA. But this lineart is WITHOUT AA!
I was asking about apply it or not to this picture.
Thanks anyway for feedback!

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Quote Friend Replybullet Posted: 26 November 2012 at 8:38am
you're welcome.  Do you understand your mistakes with banding?  If not we can explain in more depth.

Look forward to your progress with this piece. 
As for your question, I would go with AA in this piece, since you have a background. 
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