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shaface
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Quote shaface Replybullet Topic: Revision Question
    Posted: 27 April 2013 at 10:15pm
Hey I am pretty new and uploaded the little gif below, I got a notification of revisions but wasn't really sure what to revise, is the gif too basic? Or does it just stink too bad?

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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 28 April 2013 at 5:24am
I sent this back for revision because the member votes were mostly no votes. I personally, may have added this to your gallery because there is some level of control demonstrated but when you zoom in and look closely there really are some weaknesses that are far more evident because of the simple style you chose to make. Nothing is wrong with simple styled pixels but the simpler the pixels the better the pixelling needs to be. The overall piece is fine but the quality of the lines in the mouth animation is terrible and very dirty. The bottom as it bounces down is acceptable but could be cleaned up a little too.
Sooooo...its fixable :)
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Quote shaface Replybullet Posted: 28 April 2013 at 10:26am
Mystery solved, I will clean it up and make use of the WIP forum more often, I assume it is the same deal with the most recent post of mine entitled Hai Animation.
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