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AngelsDead
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Quote AngelsDead Replybullet Topic: Revision
    Posted: 09 July 2013 at 3:09pm
Eeehm..

Im new here.. and a almost all my works weren't allowed and put into revision..

I found out that blurr was mostly the isseu, but I didn't use blurr with these :




what did I do wrong with them?
btw, last one maybe also had blurr but I don't remember it from that one. First one diffently not
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 09 July 2013 at 5:13pm
On the bride and groom you are missing several pixels in the skirt and the neighboring pixels are semi transparent which indicate something was dodged or blurred and the gif output CGd some spots. This piece in addition demonstrates very little control on the pixel level and while borderline it leans a little more to Oekaki than pixel art. Your smaller bride/groom have the same issues but are slightly closer to the line and have remained up for member voting. Don't hold your breath on that piece.

The faceless punk has similar output issues indicated by the strays around the heart. This piece lacks any control on the pixel level and the coloring on the skin is just there with clusters that do not define any areas and with so many isolated pixels within the skin its hard to justify its inclusion.
These things are fixable and overall most of your work needs definition and higher contrast in your palette to help in readability. You are aware of the blur toll and stuff now but I still suggest you view and review cure's pixelart thread and perhaps the noobtorial thread too. Both of these are under the resource section. Changing themes in your profile will help you see the strays in your pieces.
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Quote AngelsDead Replybullet Posted: 10 July 2013 at 5:18am
Ok thanks, so in sort, Im not good enough.. xD

which is quite fair, since everything I posted is everything I've ever made with pixelart
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 10 July 2013 at 6:55am
Its not that you are not good enough. Its that you have yet to pick up on the basics of the pixelart style and the techniques that define a piece as pixelart. This is a process every new pixel pusher goes thru and, if interested, quickly overcomes. Go thru those threads i mentioned and make WIP threads for help and feedback ;)

E: In the pixeljoint gallery art style or vision is never judged unless its offensive or pornographic. We only go by technique and execution on the pixel level. k.

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