Pixel Joint Forum: See my PixelArt Flashlight

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amelief
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Topic: See my PixelArt Flashlight
Posted: 17 June 2014 at 11:05am

Gi Guys!

I'm android developer. I want to show you my pixel art flashlight.
So I need your comments or crits to make better my app.
check out: http://bit.ly/1lrZU11

Thanks!

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Mike9377
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Posted: 17 June 2014 at 1:52pm

Its ok. There is nothing much too it.

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jalonso
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Posted: 17 June 2014 at 7:13pm

@Mike9377, amelief is asking what can be improved so that theres 'more to it'.
C+C is great and highly encouraged but do try to be more constructive

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amelief
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Posted: 18 June 2014 at 7:11am

Originally posted by jalonso

@Mike9377, amelief is asking what can be improved so that theres 'more to it'.C+C is great and highly encouraged but do try to be more constructive

my application is very simple, maybe it needs some improvement

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Yuran
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Posted: 18 June 2014 at 1:56pm

I think - in simplicity is perfection. I really like your pixels.
But if you want to somehow develop their idea, you can try to enlarge the image without loss of quality and add small details.
Here is an example of what I mean :)
....
oh, I said without thinking

Anyway, I can `t advise something to improve it more, but.. to draw something new?

Wonderful art for the application

Edited by Yuran - 18 June 2014 at 2:08pm

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amelief
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Posted: 20 June 2014 at 2:44pm

Originally posted by Yuran

I think - in simplicity is perfection. I really like your pixels.
But if you want to somehow develop their idea, you can try to enlarge the image without loss of quality and add small details.
Here is an example of what I mean :)
....
oh, I said without thinking

Anyway, I can `t advise something to improve it more, but.. to draw something new?

Wonderful art for the application

I really appreciate every comment
Thanks for everybody!

Edited by amelief - 20 June 2014 at 2:44pm

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amelief Seaman Joined: 17 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Topic: See my PixelArt Flashlight Posted: 17 June 2014 at 11:05am
	Gi Guys! I'm android developer. I want to show you my pixel art flashlight. So I need your comments or crits to make better my app. check out: http://bit.ly/1lrZU11 Thanks!
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Mike9377 Midshipman Joined: 20 November 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 37	Posted: 17 June 2014 at 1:52pm
	Its ok. There is nothing much too it.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 17 June 2014 at 7:13pm
	@Mike9377, amelief is asking what can be improved so that theres 'more to it'. C+C is great and highly encouraged but do try to be more constructive
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
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amelief Seaman Joined: 17 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 18 June 2014 at 7:11am
	*Originally posted by jalonso* @Mike9377, amelief is asking what can be improved so that theres 'more to it'.C+C is great and highly encouraged but do try to be more constructive my application is very simple, maybe it needs some improvement
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Yuran Commander Joined: 10 November 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 329	Posted: 18 June 2014 at 1:56pm
	I think - in simplicity is perfection. I really like your pixels. But if you want to somehow develop their idea, you can try to enlarge the image without loss of quality and add small details. Here is an example of what I mean :) .... oh, I said without thinking Anyway, I can `t advise something to improve it more, but.. to draw something new? Wonderful art for the application Edited by Yuran - 18 June 2014 at 2:08pm
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amelief Seaman Joined: 17 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 20 June 2014 at 2:44pm
	*Originally posted by Yuran* I think - in simplicity is perfection. I really like your pixels. But if you want to somehow develop their idea, you can try to enlarge the image without loss of quality and add small details. Here is an example of what I mean :) .... oh, I said without thinking Anyway, I can `t advise something to improve it more, but.. to draw something new? Wonderful art for the application I really appreciate every comment Thanks for everybody! Edited by amelief - 20 June 2014 at 2:44pm
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