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DuPz0r
Seaman ![]() Joined: 01 February 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
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I made this apartment, its my first one so im not sure what you guys think.
This is what i have so far: ![]() Tell me what i could add to it, or improve apon? Edited by DuPz0r |
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Monkey 'o Doom
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994 |
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I love the shimmery effect, but what are those squares? |
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DuPz0r
Seaman ![]() Joined: 01 February 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
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Rugs lol.....
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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wow, thats fancy, yes, yes, i like. I do think the plant containers are
too big. the rugs are tooooooo.......i dont know........something
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Shark
Commander ![]() ![]() a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136 |
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that animation is tight
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Snark, we love yuu.
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DuPz0r
Seaman ![]() Joined: 01 February 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
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ok, here is an update although its not animated...
I just dont see any point in animating it again until its finished. ![]() Tell me what you think now? Edited by DuPz0r |
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miau
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 11 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 122 |
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exterminate the black outlines and add some texture to them..
Same counts for the bed and so on The floor looks kinda fun now that I took a closer look on it :D The animation is hawt indeed <3 EDIT: you just posted your update when I wrote my entry But I guess my tips are still considerable ![]() Edited by miau |
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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Yes the black outlines are out of place here. Sofa has them, coffee
table does not, half the bad has them the other does not. The tv and
sofa are out of scale, tv too big, sofa too small. Composition is
improved. The floor is great.
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DuPz0r
Seaman ![]() Joined: 01 February 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
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Yeah, i was just about replace the black outlines with color.
And im gonna try texturing things soon (like the floor) Edit - here, what do you think of it now that i've blanded the colors more: ![]() Edited by DuPz0r |
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jalonso
Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537 |
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Nice, I'm moving in. (TV too big?)
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Blueberry_pie
Rear Admiral ![]() ![]() Joined: 24 July 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2176 |
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Originally posted by jalonso (TV too big?) A TV can never be too big ![]() DuPz0r: I like the way you did those colour-changing walls. |
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Larwick
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I like it, although i think i prefered the square plant pots. I think the problem with the mat's before was that they were too bland and untextured. Ok well, as crit, i still think some of the outlines are too dark, and there's too much variation in their shades. Take the bed for instance, then compare it to the coffee table and mat. See? Anyway, i'm lovin the wallpaper, although i'm not keen on the man being there, he seems to spoil the atmosphere for me. |
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DuPz0r
Seaman ![]() Joined: 01 February 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
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I've been really busy, but i finally finished it. I removed the guy in
the end, he just didnt fit in, so i scrapped that. I moved the plant
pot, and put a radio next to the bed.
![]() Uploading it now. Edited by DuPz0r |
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Mr. J Blacc
Seaman ![]() Joined: 03 April 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1 |
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as I allready told you on gta-sa I like the added radio and it looks great overall
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inkspot
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 05 May 2005 Location: Estonia Online Status: Offline Posts: 452 |
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That big TV screen is too close to the coutch, and besides, i prefer watching TV from bed! |
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