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Quote DuPz0r Replybullet Topic: Chill Out Apartment (Finished)
    Posted: 02 February 2006 at 3:49am
I made this apartment, its my first one so im not sure what you guys think.
This is what i have so far:

Tell me what i could add to it, or improve apon?


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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 02 February 2006 at 5:22am

I love the shimmery effect, but what are those squares?


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Quote DuPz0r Replybullet Posted: 02 February 2006 at 5:24am
Rugs lol.....
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 02 February 2006 at 6:23am
wow, thats fancy, yes, yes, i like. I do think the plant containers are too big. the rugs are tooooooo.......i dont know........something
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 02 February 2006 at 8:51am
that animation is tight
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Quote DuPz0r Replybullet Posted: 03 February 2006 at 6:54am
ok, here is an update although its not animated...
I just dont see any point in animating it again until its finished.

Tell me what you think now?


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Quote miau Replybullet Posted: 03 February 2006 at 6:59am
exterminate the black outlines and add some texture to them..
Same counts for the bed and so on
The floor looks kinda fun now that I took a closer look on it :D
The animation is hawt indeed <3

EDIT: you just posted your update when I wrote my entry
But I guess my tips are still considerable


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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 03 February 2006 at 7:30am
Yes the black outlines are out of place here. Sofa has them, coffee table does not, half the bad has them the other does not. The tv and sofa are out of scale, tv too big, sofa too small. Composition is improved. The floor is great.
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Quote DuPz0r Replybullet Posted: 03 February 2006 at 7:36am
Yeah, i was just about replace the black outlines with color.
And im gonna try texturing things soon (like the floor)

Edit -  here, what do you think of it now that i've blanded the colors more:



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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 04 February 2006 at 6:34pm
Nice, I'm moving in. (TV too big?)
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Quote Blueberry_pie Replybullet Posted: 05 February 2006 at 1:32am
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(TV too big?)

A TV can never be too big

DuPz0r: I like the way you did those colour-changing walls.
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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 05 February 2006 at 2:57am

I like it, although i think i prefered the square plant pots. I think the problem with the mat's before was that they were too bland and untextured.

Ok well, as crit, i still think some of the outlines are too dark, and there's too much variation in their shades. Take the bed for instance, then compare it to the coffee table and mat. See? Anyway, i'm lovin the wallpaper, although i'm not keen on the man being there, he seems to spoil the atmosphere for me.

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Quote DuPz0r Replybullet Posted: 02 April 2006 at 8:04am
I've been really busy, but i finally finished it. I removed the guy in the end, he just didnt fit in, so i scrapped that. I moved the plant pot, and put a radio next to the bed.



Uploading it now.


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Quote Mr. J Blacc Replybullet Posted: 03 April 2006 at 5:16am
as I allready told you on gta-sa I like the added radio and it looks great overall
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Quote inkspot Replybullet Posted: 16 April 2006 at 3:12am

That big TV screen is too close to the coutch, and besides, i prefer watching TV from bed!

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