WIP (Work In Progress)
 Pixel Joint Forum : Pixel Art : WIP (Work In Progress)
Message Icon Topic: Need some pointers Post Reply Post New Topic
Author Message
matt_a56
Seaman
Seaman


Joined: 07 October 2014
Online Status: Offline
Posts: 3
Quote matt_a56 Replybullet Topic: Need some pointers
    Posted: 24 September 2014 at 1:18pm
As my title states, I'd like some pointers on how to make my pixel art better. I've been making pixel art since the beginning of July, and I'm also trying to use it as a means to obtain money over on another site, but I lack the means to promote myself. I was recommended to come here by another pixel artist named Destiny Wolf, or Ahruon.

Below are three of five pieces of art I've completed, each one giving me ideas on how they should look like.



I would appreciate any help that can be offered, and any constructive criticism is welcomed.
IP IP Logged
jtfjtfjtf
Commander
Commander
Avatar

Joined: 17 July 2018
Online Status: Offline
Posts: 162
Quote jtfjtfjtf Replybullet Posted: 24 September 2014 at 6:18pm
If you haven't done so already i'd suggest reading the stickied tutorial threads in Resources and Support.

One problem is the amount of banding you have in your shading. Banding over emphasizes the horizontal and vertical nature of the pixel grid. Cure's stickied pixel tutorial has solutions for banding.

Your color ramps are also pretty bland. It looks like you're just choosing darker and lighter values of colors. Hue shifting can make your color ramps more interesting.

I'll also say a forward shot of very straight people is pretty hard to volumize since it's pretty flat and doesn't extend into the z-axis that much. The choice depends though on what you're using these characters for.
IP IP Logged
matt_a56
Seaman
Seaman


Joined: 07 October 2014
Online Status: Offline
Posts: 3
Quote matt_a56 Replybullet Posted: 24 September 2014 at 7:37pm
Thanks for the advice, I'll take a look at his tutorial, and work on them tomorrow.
IP IP Logged
Post Reply Post New Topic
Printable version Printable version

Forum Jump
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot create polls in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum