Great, tho the baby is floating in mid-air, not dipping in water.

I love it like that, on second thought.


Edited by caca - 05 October 2014 at 9:59am

yea

That's true about bodies at that size, but it's good practice.

#31 is yours, and it looks good so far . I put WIPs in the main image to allow others to take & start neighboring tiles. Therefore I prefer not to put early WIP stages in the main image as they would be misleading. So I encourage you to develop this as fast as possible so I can put it.

Speedy you could maybe do something in the above area. It seems bland as is.

Here's a quick initial layout - I'm a bit busy, might get to it during the week.

I'll give 8 a try.

great way to handle the dragon.

Nice job

93 is too hard for me :( I want to try to put the egypt elements into 77.

Edited by Limes - 06 October 2014 at 9:28am

I'm taking #53
@aeveis, Is the dragon in water?


Edited by jalonso - 06 October 2014 at 1:37pm

@Limes; it's completely ok if you want to pass, you can look back after a while if it's not taken. But as Jal said, you may also choose to get some tips from others, too, which is one of the best sides of collabs. Giving you #77 now, tell me if you change your mind.

Some edits:


@speedycube; looking nice so far.

Main image updated.


Edited by Gecimen - 06 October 2014 at 3:58pm

Here is my WIP #3 for tile #19.

I seriously don't know if this is better or worse than my previous one. I'm trying out a lot of different things and making other things up as I go so I don't know if they look good to other people or not.

Please let me know what looks off to you or anything that you think should be improved. Crits, comments and ideas are all welcome: my hope is that with enough experimentation and feedback I can eventually learn how to pixel decently enough.

Thanks

@aeveis, The dragon is just a a rough. I will adjust to your part of the dragon since I'm just following your lines for that section.

Adding the headless horseman from Sleepy Hollow :)
Tile #53



Edited by jalonso - 07 October 2014 at 7:32am

WIP #4 for tile #19

Smoothed some shadow/highlight lines and shifted some hues to tone down contrast. In general this seems to smooth things down and makes some parts look cleaner.

@Gecimen: I tried to address all your comments as I understood them, let me know if I left anything out. Thanks for the feedback, it helps a ton.

I can't think of anything else to do on this one ATM so I'll call it done unless anyone brings up any changes, corrections or improvements. All feedback is welcome.

Thank you

Pix.Ed.; yes it looks much better now, except maybe you could smooth out the border of the giant hand, as Limes pointed out. No rush though, it's not too inconsistent with the rest of the hand.

Limes; cancelling out #77 and giving you #45.


Edited by Gecimen - 07 October 2014 at 2:15pm

Fixed up the top of the hand, hope that looks better. Thank @Gecimen and @Limes.

You've done a nice job all around and do not understand what's mentioned with the hand so I leave that to them.
My only crit is the light green highlight grass on the right hand side which should have none because of the lighting. The ghosts also have shadows that are top down and also do not follow the lightsource. So yeah, all is cool but the lightsource is inconsistent. Its not a huge deal here but consistent lightsources in all your art will make you a better artist and is important in art even when its not realistic, k.
Below is the lightsource picked for this collab copied from the 1st page.

@jalonso Yeah the dragon is in the water - I might chnages things depending on where I decide how I do the water or so. Your part looks good so far! I'll use that for reference as well.

#11 please, kthx, l8r. :)

Not that easy :/

Thx!

#11 early wip (the magenta is not part of the palette and will not be in the final version):

]

Rough WIP. Haven't decided on what to put in it yet.

Totally! I left that blank, really. Do whatever you want or need and I'll adjust to it.

I kinda made the wing skin translucent to add a little variety but I'll adjust to your wing too.

This tile is really for my headless horseman so all the dragon is just a filler in my tile and will follow you and eaveis.

Mind is having difficulties interpreting the lightsource in the template and wonders whether the cast shadow is accurate...(?):

#11 wip update (trying to make connections and lighting work first before adding any content... overdrawing a tiny amount of pixels in neighboring tiles to fix what looks like a stroke accident and to improve seamless transition):

@a3um, no. I love the skulls. I'm going to RIP you :p
Just do whatever you want in your tile.

Gecimen, I like a3um's idea and direction much better than what I had. I'll update this tile next while I wait for dragon progress.