Pixel Joint Forum: Walk Cycle Animation

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   Hey everyone this is my first post here! A friend of mine showed me this site yesterday and told me I should join. 

I feel like I am almost done with this, but it does need a bit more.

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AlexAshbyXD Seaman Joined: 19 October 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Topic: Walk Cycle Animation Posted: 20 October 2014 at 12:26pm
	Hey everyone this is my first post here! A friend of mine showed me this site yesterday and told me I should join. I feel like I am almost done with this, but it does need a bit more.
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HarveyDentMustDie Midshipman Joined: 26 March 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87	Posted: 20 October 2014 at 1:34pm
	Earring should move in the opposite way. When head goes forward earring should go back. Also leg movement is very strange, you have enough frames to create nice walk cycle. Feet change position drastically between frame 2 and 3, and later between 4-th and 5-th frame changes are almost unnoticeable. Changes should be more symmetrical. You should look at some references. Also post your art in original size so we can make edits. This forum have left click zoom in option. Edited by HarveyDentMustDie - 20 October 2014 at 1:35pm
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 20 October 2014 at 1:45pm
	Hey Alex it's Derek. I introduced Alex to PJ so he is new to the forum posting standards. Yeah please post a 1x zoom regular resolution of the sprite so I can easily make edits, otherwise I have to like do an extra step of resizing the sprite myself before I can edit it and show you some things I would do differently. Alex's digital illustration is wicked, he is just new to spriting and pixel art low-fidelity. Edited by Souly - 20 October 2014 at 1:47pm
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 20 October 2014 at 2:18pm
	SOULY!!!
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AlexAshbyXD Seaman Joined: 19 October 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 20 October 2014 at 2:27pm
	HarveyDentMustDie: Hey thanks buddy I will start making those adjustments! Souly: Heyy sup man! ** Heyyy ok here is original size
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 20 October 2014 at 5:44pm
	OT: Welcome to Pixeljoint. We had to send your avatar submission back, k. That is not considered pixelart.
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AlexAshbyXD Seaman Joined: 19 October 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 20 October 2014 at 11:15pm
	jalonso: Hey thanks this is a pretty cool place! About the image I'll remember that in the future. Started to redesign her and redue the frames with the feedback I had gotten.
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AlexAshbyXD Seaman Joined: 19 October 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 22 October 2014 at 3:52pm
	Some more work on her but more work to do!
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RebeaLeion Commander Joined: 04 October 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 321	Posted: 23 October 2014 at 11:18am
	I am no one to talk about how to do pixel right etc. But I d like to say that i like your sprite.
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 25 October 2014 at 4:36pm
	Oh wow Alex that update is off the hook! I really like the redesign without the black outline, and the cycle is nice an bouncy. I think the blue lock of hair jumps a little far back but other than that great progress.
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Finlal Rear Admiral Joined: 08 November 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 404	Posted: 26 October 2014 at 4:18am
	Nice animation, i like it! To center an animation might be a good thing for spotting mistakes and stuff. For example, you may notice that red lock drawn equally on 10th and 1st frames which is making that "freezing" effect since they're coming after each other. If you just slightly chande that lock on 1st frame, animation would look much better. Also, you missed shadow on face on some frames. Edited by Finlal - 27 October 2014 at 3:34am
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AlexAshbyXD Seaman Joined: 19 October 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Posted: 27 October 2014 at 5:27pm
	RebelLeion: Thanks man! Souly: Thanks dude! Yeah I wanted to get rid of the black outline it wasnt working for me. About the hair lock I agree yeah it's not quite right to me looking at it now. Finlal: Wow thanks Finlal that edit looks great! I can see what you mean about the locking now. Going to have one last look at it tonight before calling it done.
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