Pixel Joint Forum: Contest entry - vampire pony

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I was considering animating it. Thoughts?

(Just realized she has no fangs. Gotta add those.)}

Edit: Only upon submitting it do I realise how terrible the lower half of her hair is.

Edited by DrTripwire - 30 October 2014 at 4:00pm

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DrTripwire Commander Joined: 29 October 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 174	Topic: Contest entry - vampire pony - critique? Posted: 30 October 2014 at 3:59pm
	I was considering animating it. Thoughts? (Just realized she has no fangs. Gotta add those.)} Edit: Only upon submitting it do I realise how terrible the lower half of her hair is. Edited by DrTripwire - 30 October 2014 at 4:00pm
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Xevil Midshipman Joined: 17 March 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 57	Posted: 30 October 2014 at 6:19pm
	Imo there is not enough depth, very little shading, even a side view of something has shaded areas
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DrTripwire Commander Joined: 29 October 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 174	Posted: 30 October 2014 at 7:13pm
	Alright, I'll work on that! :D Thanks!
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Limes Commander Joined: 15 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 683	Posted: 30 October 2014 at 11:14pm
	Hair is also pillowshaded try to find a light source and stick to it.
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skittle Commander Joined: 20 July 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 350	Posted: 31 October 2014 at 4:42am
	Nice start! Think about where your light source is, and then think about how the light should affect the face. Example Your hair is also very messy atm, I would suggest bringing it down to three colours so you can get the basic shading down, and then maybe expand your palette if you want to add more detail (but you could even make it quite detailed with only three colours). I hope you finish this and submit to the challenge!
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DrTripwire Commander Joined: 29 October 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 174	Posted: 31 October 2014 at 7:15am
	Oh, okay! Thank you all a bunch. I tried to have the lightsource from the top, but I guess it didn't work out. xD Thank you for the edit! I'll go back and compare the two.
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DrTripwire Commander Joined: 29 October 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 174	Posted: 31 October 2014 at 7:31am
	I like this version much better, even though I goof'd on the ear. xD Thanks for the edit, ADrawingMan! Edited by DrTripwire - 31 October 2014 at 7:36am
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