Pixel Joint Forum: Vader WIP

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   hey guys, tell me what you think about my rough vader sketch:

also, can some1 help with the neck? there is supposed to be a chain there, but it looks like a rope, so any help with that would also be apreciated. Thx!

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{TGH}Jedi-Sam Seaman Joined: 21 January 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20	Topic: Vader WIP Posted: 08 February 2006 at 6:44pm
	hey guys, tell me what you think about my rough vader sketch: also, can some1 help with the neck? there is supposed to be a chain there, but it looks like a rope, so any help with that would also be apreciated. Thx!
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alkaline Commander Joined: 25 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 868	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 6:57pm
	the whole thing looks quite squished in.
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{TGH}Jedi-Sam Seaman Joined: 21 January 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:13pm
	What do you mean by "squished in?" do you mean it is to long, like... like this: ------->(picture)<--------- sry its hard to explain but like what do you mean?
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:14pm
	I think he means that it's too tall and not wide enough, at least that's what it looks like to me
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{TGH}Jedi-Sam Seaman Joined: 21 January 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:27pm
	does this seem less squished? i shortened the neck and took out the shoulders.
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alkaline Commander Joined: 25 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 868	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:29pm
	I mean the whole thing still looks too thin..try widening the face and making everything wider. <--(vader)-->
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 7:38pm
	thats cuz he didnt crop the helmet vertically
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7fags Seaman Joined: 07 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 8:13pm

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{TGH}Jedi-Sam Seaman Joined: 21 January 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 9:33pm
	that actually isn't the picture i got it from. i always draw cartoon vaders so my pictures are where i got the sketch from Edit: is this any less long and squished? Edited by {TGH}Jedi-Sam
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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 9:53pm
	The eyes are far to high then

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Shark Commander a.k.a. Feron Joined: 02 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2136	Posted: 08 February 2006 at 11:24pm
	the mouth triangle ios too big.
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{TGH}Jedi-Sam Seaman Joined: 21 January 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20	Posted: 09 February 2006 at 5:50am
	here is an update. tell me what you think.
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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 09 February 2006 at 9:39am
	Much better. The eyes are rounded not triangles, but i bet you were aware of that, anyways if the eyes wererounded it would add depth. Just round the tops and keep the bottttttttom flat.

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{TGH}Jedi-Sam Seaman Joined: 21 January 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 20	Posted: 09 February 2006 at 2:18pm
	sweet. is the helmet too big tho? it kinda looks a bit big but im not sure
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