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Seanw265
Seaman
Joined: 04 March 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1 |
![]() Topic: Run cycle WIPPosted: 10 March 2015 at 4:59pm |
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Hello all,
I've been lurking around here for a while just admiring everyone's work and I thought it was about time that I try to draw and animate something. I've never been much of an artist but I'm determined to learn (not to mention I need art for my game). So here's my first take at a run cycle. I'd love some feedback!
Obviously it's a work in progress. Thanks! |
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Palocles
Midshipman
Joined: 02 December 2013 Online Status: Offline Posts: 65 |
![]() Posted: 10 March 2015 at 6:24pm |
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Looks pretty good.
You could probably have the elbows bending and the hands (such as they are) coming up a little higher. Another thing. The eye on the right looks strange because it's right up against the outline. (makes it look like 3 x 2 pix.) You could remove those two black pixels from the side and see how that looks. |
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