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Seanw265
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Quote Seanw265 Replybullet Topic: Run cycle WIP
    Posted: 10 March 2015 at 4:59pm
Hello all,
I've been lurking around here for a while just admiring everyone's work and I thought it was about time that I try to draw and animate something. I've never been much of an artist but I'm determined to learn (not to mention I need art for my game). So here's my first take at a run cycle. I'd love some feedback!



Obviously it's a work in progress.
Thanks!
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Quote Palocles Replybullet Posted: 10 March 2015 at 6:24pm
Looks pretty good.

You could probably have the elbows bending and the hands (such as they are) coming up a little higher.

Another thing. The eye on the right looks strange because it's right up against the outline. (makes it look like 3 x 2 pix.) You could remove those two black pixels from the side and see how that looks.
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