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Quote Axteryo Replybullet Topic: Pixel study
    Posted: 15 June 2015 at 5:17pm
Since im new to pixel art/color, im going to be sticking to the gameboy palette for a while. How do i improve this image with the current colors?







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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 15 June 2015 at 5:25pm
What are you doing to post an image? What imagehost?

It should all work if you hit the tree icon and paste the direct url in the popup.
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Quote Axteryo Replybullet Posted: 15 June 2015 at 5:28pm
sorry for double post

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Quote Axteryo Replybullet Posted: 15 June 2015 at 5:40pm
nvm i figured it out
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 15 June 2015 at 5:43pm
Cool. Moving to WIP section.
Nice start. Using a ref or freestyle?
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Quote Axteryo Replybullet Posted: 15 June 2015 at 5:45pm
Using a reference. I wanted to study the placement of value as well as form. Want me to post reference image?

Also moving to wip?
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 15 June 2015 at 7:48pm
No. I just asked to get to know you.
Moved to WIP section because your thread is a WIP = Work in progress.
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Quote Iscalio Replybullet Posted: 23 July 2015 at 1:53am
Looks pretty good to me, but feels like that darkest dark is being used differently than the rest of the colors, as a line instead of a value range. so that feels a bit odd.
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Quote noriah Replybullet Posted: 27 July 2015 at 7:26am
Since you're working most of the image in light and shadow, I think you might have an easier time improving it if you tried to make it work without outlines.

Other than that, I don't have a lot to praise or critique given I'm not quite sure what you're going for. As a study, you might learn more if you did a figure head to toe, as you'd have to work your pose to make it balanced, and also learn to draw the whole figure. For critique, it'd help if you posted the reference if you want critique on how well you're emulating it.

You've worked up the forms in the torso pretty well, so I'd probably say the weak point right now is the head and face.
Not that it's no good, but as humans we focus on faces as they're important to us. Right now the torso has more detail than the face.

If you'd like more figures to study from, this site is good if you're not afraid of artistic nudes: http://figuresfordrawing.tumblr.com/
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